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Oceans Tears..........Tanka
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Oceans Tears..........Tanka |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages 
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 Oceans Tears Tidal waves rushing Splashing with beautiful strength Pouring oceans tears Within sacrifice of plea Don't destroy the inner me Charisma |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
I am speechless Charisma~ This is without question, your finest tanka ever! Into the library it goes!  And what a perfect graphic. This is just so beautiful and deep. After reading this, I was touched in many ways, aware of your message and so much more!  Take care, Melissa |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Charisma~ Such a lovely offering from your pen. There is beauty in the waves of you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Charisma it's in my library... I enjoyed this PoetFriend ~coco~ You get a lot more lesson mileage when you lose in some situations than always win... |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
I don't think there is a wave out there that could take you down. Wonderful Tanka my friend....filled with the all the beauty and power that you always give us. If you find yourself stranded in a storm ...then reach for my hand and we will play in the puddles together |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Melissa: thank you and I am honoured that you will save this one in your library, and I am grateful for your always wonderful comments.....thank you my friend Marge: and its all of you that make my pen flow with beauty as you give me faith with wonderful thoughts and comments, when I post my simple poetry inhere. thank you for doing that my friend Coco: well thank you my dear friend, I am truly grateful that you think that this one is a keeper....I am honoured by that. Mark: as I said above at Marge.....its because of all of you, who gives me faith to believe in myself and the poems I wrote......you all aloft me with your wonderful compliments and comments. thank you for doing that my dear friend. |
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StumperDaBumper Junior Member
since 2000-12-20
Posts 19State of Mind, Compassion USA |
Bumpintine Bumpintine Won't a bump be mighty fine Another trip around the forum cause I think it's awful boring without a little bump or two Here's one from me just for you! Happy Bumpintine! Are we having fun yet? |
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