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Etch-A-Sketch(first post) |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
This is the first poem I posted here!!! Back on 5/26/99.... Life is an Etch-a-Sketch It's all in what you make it Sometimes you have to pick up your life and shake it!!!!! Now it seems a bit juvenile......LOL |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
This is great!  I like this and playing with Etch-a-sketch too! |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Thank you! But it's so lame......sigh! One of the ones I wish I'd never posted. And it HAD to be the first...geez. |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
If that’s how you feel look how far you’ve come! But I still like it a lot….it’s short with a great message….sometimes your stuck in the same picture and a change can be good…so I stand on GREAT!  |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
etch-a-sketch this poem fetched a smile |
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Elizabeth Cor Senior Member
since 2000-10-13
Posts 879Over the river and through the woods |
ROTFL!!! Oh, Sharon... Actually, the first post I remember from you was about carrying a big eraser... this seems to fit. Hehehehe. Well, at least it makes everything else you write just That. Much. Better. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
It is nice to look back and see how we have matured in our writing.. hopefully i still have alot to look forward to...thanks for sharing  ~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Ariana Senior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 571Orlando, Florida |
It may seem juvenile to you, but if you really look at it there is truth to it too! Regardless - nicely done. And yes, I have read your other poems and certainly have come a long way. Write on! Ariana [This message has been edited by Ariana (edited 02-03-2001).] |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
No doubt. . . simple is the hardest thing to do. . . ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Poet deVine - a first one or whatever, I like it. |
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