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desperado
Member

since 1999-05-24

Posts 312
FT Hood,Tx

0 posted 2001-02-03 05:15 AM

close your eyes and shake my hand
don't say the words upon your tongue
through think and thin we've had our fun
but our time is up and this is done
we've had a drink or two in our time
watched movies at night and laughed at the sun
now it's time to say goodbye and move on
through a setting sun into another dawn
friends we are and friends we'll stay
as time goes on and people come and go
the only phrase to say is see you soon
sooner than later we'll be standing on the moon
staring down from the heavenly heights
watching others run around doing what we did
and laugh once more and drink a toast
to all the things we loved the most
so we'll sit there and enjoy the sun
though it's warmth will never reach us
as we sit on clouds as angels do
cause friends forever are me and you

see you soon byers.

"There were times in my life when I was going insane tryin to walk through the pain. When I lost my grip and I hit the floor yeah I thought I could le

doreen peri
Member Elite

since 1999-05-25

Posts 3812
Virginia

1 posted 2001-02-03 06:58 AM

REALLY????? when?????

great poem, des!

snowpants
Member Elite

since 2000-09-16

Posts 2061
KS

2 posted 2001-02-03 02:30 PM

'so we'll sit there and enjoy the sun
though it's warmth will never reach us
as we sit on clouds as angels do
cause friends forever are me and you'

This is such a moving piece, desperado! Wonderful!

sp

...if I ride these dreams to the Irish Sea,
oh, even there, I know your heart rides with me...

Saxoness

Senior Member

since 1999-07-18

Posts 1102
Texas

3 posted 2001-02-04 11:19 PM

Wonderful tribute to a friend, luv. He'll appreciate it. *hugs*

"Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

4 posted 2001-02-05 01:26 PM

a friend should be forever, sometimes they leave (sigh)

"I walked beside the evening sea and dreamed a dream that could not be." George William Curtis

Nate Dogg
Senior Member

since 1999-11-15

Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton

5 posted 2001-02-05 01:46 PM

This is a beautiful piece with wonderful imagery...brilliant write!!

Nathan

Jill
Member

since 2001-02-02

Posts 62
Louisiana

6 posted 2001-02-05 01:50 PM

I agree with Nate....love the imagery. I am looking forward to more.

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