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Snow Not So White Pt 1(Humour, and a story, what more can I say Kari, 'tis done) |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England 
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Snow Not So White Part 1 Write a story, she says, she would it’s so easy for her She doesn’t have any trouble getting words to stir But if you really want a story then I’ll do what I can Oh well, what does it matter real work can go hang What sort of story do you want? Not something sad? Personally I’d rather have something that’s plain glad All the best stories start with once upon a time Still expecting this to be good would be a real crime Anyway we begin the adventure, huh now that’s a laugh I bet that there’s no action, for I haven’t got the staff I’ve had a root around in my extremely untidy mind This is the tale, it’s not exciting but all I could find Once upon a time there lived, now why do we say that? Of course there lived, everything lives including all that Okay I can see you’re jigging about now the tale starts It’s all about the trials of a life that quickly falls apart But I don’t really want to write anything sad today If I change it about, you wouldn’t mind really what I say? Okay there was a young maid known by the name Snow Why do they not have proper names I’d like to know? Who in their right mind would call their own baby that? Snow isn’t a name it sounds like something to call a cat Not what you’d call a daughter is it? No not very likely You called her Snow, yes a lovely name! No I’d say crikey! Anyway these stupid people called her Snow, yes really I’m sure they were lovely and I mean that most sincerely Quite apart from their inability to find her a pretty name Anyway it seems to have stopped her playing any game If you hear Snow what is the first thing you’ll think That’s right ice cold, snowballs, and skating on a rink You don’t think she sounds like a warm and cosy lass You think, she seems likely to freeze off your as…sets Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning [This message has been edited by Marsha (edited 02-03-2001).] |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
LOL  This is too funny love. . . and I'm glad that you didn't write a sad one either!!! ----------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
Marsha, I had a great laugh for this one! So many times I think of something I could write about and find "it goes no where". Well, you sure showed me a thing or two! I loved it. Hugs, ME |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
AD dear heart, So am I love, this took long enough. As ME said it was going no where very fast, so I wrote it as quickly as I could. And I'm really glad it raised a  smile, (now there's an innocent look love )And if you read the other two parts you can see they went nowhere either. But I was never really fond of Snow White, I always thought she was a tricky Miss. and this definitely proves it. Thank you love Take care love Mushy ME, love, yes I'm afraid this is one of those tales that went absolutely nowhere. Still don't blame me, blame Kari (Sunshine) it was her challenge. And I couldn't put it off any longer. Thank you muchly Take care Mushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
ROTFLMBO....I use to have a cat named SNOWball.....LOL....on to TWO! |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari dear heart, a story you said, and this is the story. You surely didn't want me to think up a story as well. I love the cat Enjoyed it did you love? Take care love Majestic Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Mushy, I love it! You write a Clayton's story better than anyone I know. Did you ever read my Bolivar Story if not I may re-post it in the next few days. write on Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
LMAO you goof  |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kethry dear hear, no love I didn't get a chance to read it please repost it love. No one said I had to think up a story as well, did they, nooooooooo. (You know me dear heart, if in doubt cheat ) I shall look forward to reading your Bolivar story. Knowing that it is utterly wonderful. And did it make you grin love? I can't help it, I just never trusted that Snow, anyone who is sooooooo good seems very suspect to me!!Thank you dear heart Take care love as always Slushy Paula dear heart, a few smiles for my friends, and as I said blame Kari, it was her fault. I do think it's better my way than by the brothers, don't you. And wouldn't it have made a better Disney film too. Maybe it wouldn't have been suitable for children, but I always thought it needed some more humour. I know I'm a wicked woman and sooooo bad Take care love as always Mushy And thank you love Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
HA!! youre a trip!  must hurry off to read part 2! hugs, g "maybe one day we can turn and face our fears maybe one day we can reach out through our tears..." -a grant |
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