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Sun's Senryu/Choka |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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 grant thy lovely light shadows precede thee this night to gleam tomorrow ~*~ spark the idea ignite the feelings so fine catalyst of light ~*~ do not leave alone this spirit so needs your touch to shine on like you ~*~ in light to glow on in love to grow thereupon in faith to live on ~*~ 02.02.01 Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Beautiful haikus Sunshine...they are de"light"ful  ...I enjoyed these a lot, we all need a light.  |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thank you Elizabeth...indeed, where would we be, without?.... |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Indeed. . . the light will always be. . . wonderful my friend. . . ---------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Wow - well written! Very hopeful and beautiful! Hun, you're really starting to become a senryu queen Take care, Melissa |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
*wow* Karilea....you know that I would adore these serie.....beautiful.....and the touch within make me sigh....the magic of these form is so delighted. thanks for sharing Charisma |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
That's more like it Bravo! Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Yes.......Yes!!! This is truly magnificent, and I love thoughts about the sun.......... One thing though.......could you please send some of those golden rays up my way, Sunshine? Thanks!! ~~~ enjoy yourself ~~~ it's later than you think! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sven, backwards I talk too...thank you!... Melybee...some call me the Queen of Nag...I do it so well...thank you!... Charisma, I am so very glad you don't mind my stringing them together...when I get started, it's like potato chips, and I can't eat just one... Interloper, you're welcome...thank you!... On their way, Sunnyone!....I like the change in the name, too!... |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Wonderful writing, Sunshine. Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thank you my friend.... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ A page 7 delight ! Love what you do with these. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Perfect. I love them all. Poeminister |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Karilea my dear This is the form that I fear brings me many tear As always though I don't need to do them because you dear heart do them so well. I love it, truly, and I love your light today, as everyday is a Sunshiny day. Thank you love Take care as always love Majestic puckish Marsha  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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