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Walter Poe Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 787 |
Oh cruel fate holds my hand as i travel accross this immortal land The longing heart An emptey fight a longing for death of life taking flight Oh haunted fools The voices tool dances to words of voices unheard Lan said hearts As Lan said hurts A dream of pain where you lurk all we tried has flourished then died at the back of the night Note well the altogether the merri whether and the bottomless dell we the rejects rejoice in the failure of the lonely and the unwell Oh Danny boy, the pipes, the pipes are calling From glen to glen, and down the mountain side The summer's gone, and all the roses falling 'Tis |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Walter, I love the rhyming shceme in this and the bottomless dell, wonderful! write on Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
whew, wish I didn't identify so well with this, but I do, nice writing here  |
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