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You Whisper...I'm Lost
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You Whisper...I'm Lost |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
I'm lost And what you don't seem to understand Is what's missing in my life Is the touch of your gentle hand. You whisper softly Words so loving and so sweet They make me lonely And waiting til next we can meet. I'm lost Aching with this need Longing for your tender kiss For love to plant its seed. You whisper softly Unsure just what this will be Knowing I'm a part of you But do you really want me? I'm lost Without ever hearing your voice You captured this lonely heart And to give it is my choice. You whisper softly Asking for an understanding heart Waiting til the time is right Waiting for this love to start. I'm lost There's nowhere I'd rather be I'll wait til time loses itself For you to whisper softly to me. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Paula, this is so poignant and lovely! *HuGS* write on Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Paula~ Lovely. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Paula dear heart, you write and I'm found, the words that you write so beautifully shine like a light calling me home. This is utterly truly first class love. As always you write with your heart, and I love it. Do I love this, Mmmmmm Yes I do! Take care love as always Mushy  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Agust P Member
since 2000-12-29
Posts 157 |
beautiful, liked reading this one, AP |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
very nice read, the longing, so softly delivered  |
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Tammy16 Junior Member
since 2000-11-26
Posts 21 |
Paula - Beautiful expression...I know the longing you must have felt when you wrote this. Tammy |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
oh how I know these feelings so well....the desire of being together....the lost feelings......and.you describe these feelings of lost quite well. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'I'm lost And what you don't seem to understand Is what's missing in my life Is the touch of your gentle hand.' Exactly, Paula! You've worded this wonderfully. I love it! sp  'cause I want nothing more than to sit outside heaven's door and listen to you breathing... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I'm lost There's nowhere I'd rather be I'll wait til time loses itself For you to whisper softly to me. I'm lost in the tears your words bring to me today... this is quite meaningful and beautifully written and I wanted to tell you I bought a book the other day and I think you were in it "Until You" pg 19 in I Will Love You by Susan Polis Shutz...was this You? ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 02-02-2001).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
As lovely as you have ever written Paula...James |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Beautifully done! "This above all-ask yourself in the stillest hour of your night:MUST I write? Delve into yourself for a deep answer. Rainer Maria Rilke from "Le |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Kethry...I love that word poignant...you are so sweet darlin...thanks Marge...thank you kind lady Marsha...girl you always are here with a wonderful reply making me feel like my scribbles are truly worth something...thanks Agust...glad you liked it thanks jellybeans...thank you for your kind words Tammy16...yes I was longing...hoping the right person heard what I had to say...thanks Charisma...its such a lonely feeling...thanks sp...just a touch can say so many things..thank you Wynter...thank you...and no as much as I might like to claim credit...thats not me serenity...yeah you know...thanks James...thank you sweet friend you know how much your words mean to me Temptress...thank you so much |
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