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star 15
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0 posted 2001-01-31 07:20 PM



so many miles between us
to different worlds we share.
our love for each other will go strong.
and will always be there.
soon we will meet face to face
and the world will become a wonderful place.

one world it will be
just you and me
nothing will matter
the can wait.

our love will become one
and our harts will abaite
our love is forever
no matter what
or who or however

we will grow strong
and live forever young
our love for each other
will keep us young
and never ending.

we will be together
and be necer apart
because of the love
in our hearts.

____________

hope this is ok
im not the best poet in the world.  

© Copyright 2001 star 15 - All Rights Reserved
Elizabeth
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1 posted 2001-01-31 09:18 PM


I like it Star! People can be physically separated, but still connected in love.  
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2 posted 2001-02-01 02:24 PM


You know, I truly basked in word I just read!!!

"I walked beside the evening sea And dreamed a dream that could not be." George William Curtis



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3 posted 2001-02-06 11:41 PM


Star~
A delightful piece.
~*Marge*~


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4 posted 2001-02-07 12:10 PM


This is wonderful Star   I too have felt that longing for someone far away , love can trumph just believe in it


Julie

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5 posted 2001-02-10 08:01 AM


love is wonderful, and so is your poem.
enjoyed it very much.

so up above with you.

Charisma

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