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aurora rain
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0 posted 2001-01-31 07:17 PM


paradigm

nine times out of ten my heart is ashamed
of the seconds that break free of february’s
last dance and i’m heeding your last words
as the porcelain minutes fall and tip your
love over like a brimful paper cup or
an obvious allusion to paradise and when
i tip the side clear it’s a vase full of sky
swaying its arms to rhythms unchained and
it seems like the hours i need you are the hours
we play pantomime, the hours we play charades
the hours gone unnoticed and my heart stretches
its strings to minutes unheard and i play helpless
to this fever and to this audio-visual scratch,
the timbre that tears at my heart as your words go unadorned
and this silence carves out misery today as i count backwards
from ten to one, with your letters clutched in my hand nearby
“this is not your paradigm” i say ripping the seven-inch-wide seams
and my pretty slip lost its stitch when your heart fell through its
cracks into the grooves of that wooden latticework
and love can only dream. and i can only dream of you.


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1 posted 2001-01-31 08:35 PM


powerful words here Aurora. . .

well done. . .  

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Irish Rose
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2 posted 2001-02-01 02:21 PM


I read this and it flowed from one line to another.....you're very pretty, Aurora!!!

"I walked beside the evening sea And dreamed a dream that could not be." George William Curtis



aurora rain
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3 posted 2001-02-01 08:03 PM


i was wondering if this was still here.

i like the new place..

and thank you.

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