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parched morn |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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Fifteen minutes granted--fame walk the coals rebuke the flame as I cross the fiery plane... I tell you, I'll not be the same... Every step I place in sand, is wet imprint of understand, and every tear I cry within I'll dare to cry without again... and three times fold the ancient's told... of all you wish should be returned... and all my gold it shall be sold... purchase price of heart unlearned... No. It can't be done again. (remembered whisper in the wind...) I remember kiss on neck while counting every single breath and each touch of your tongue was dew... My parched morn...remembering you. whisper, whisper, tell me sweet, and damn the sun that makes dreams leave... |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
This takes my breath away! WOW! So beautiful......... leaving me out of words too........  -SEA(library) |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Serenity, This was an exciting read... The pace the expression...rapidNintense... I enjoyed this muchos muchas... ~coco~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Every step I place in sand, is wet imprint of understand, and every tear I cry within I'll dare to cry without again... ================ No. It can't be done again. (remembered whisper in the wind...) I remember kiss on neck while counting every single breath and each touch of your tongue was dew... My parched morn...remembering you. whisper, whisper, tell me sweet, and damn the sun that makes dreams leave... ================= Ive said it before and I'll say it again .. gawwwwwwd I love mardi gras poets baby  blowing kisses to your muse for this one me twin ... very very cool Sen ... may I touch your pen ... tis magic ya know love ya me If my slight Muse do please these curious days ... The pain be mine ... but thine shall be the praise. ~Shakespeare~ |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
unreal....beautiful helen |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
asks to be read quickly. . . if only it could last. . . excellent. . . ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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