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vandana
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0 posted 2001-01-30 11:56 AM



Wow,Finally 1000th post has come.I have been waiting for this day to come.Hold on Is one of my poem which a lot of meaning to it such as(my life).This poem I wrote It is about my life.As you read my poem,you'll know about it.Thank you for continuing to read my poems.
            

            When Iam strong enough
To stand and see
  What Is going on
In this world?
  When I dream of the things,
Always wanted
  To hold on
And see what time will tell me
So I just sit and wait
for these years  go by,
Think about the good things
In life,
I will just hold on
And be strong,
Don't want to be wrong
for anything I choose
Or make choice
In life,
Don't want to lose a thing
In life,
I will just hold on
And wait for tomorrow
to come,
See If there Is anything else
for me
to carry on,
I will wait for tomorrow
And see
What Is still there for me?
Meantime,
I will just hold on
to the time
And pain,
And If rain comes
And then happiness
Will surely come
Into my heart,
I will just hold on
And see
If my dreams are going to be true,
For a moment,
I will take deep breathe
Andjust hold on
Tomorrow,
Or forever,
I will just hold on......
till then.....

hold on to life I carry on....

© Copyright 2001 vandana - All Rights Reserved
Elizabeth
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1 posted 2001-01-30 12:01 PM


Doesn't it seem like holding on is sometimes all that we can do?

Congrats on 1000!

Sunshine
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2 posted 2001-01-30 12:03 PM


Congrats on 1000!  Way to go!

CocoBaci
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3 posted 2001-01-30 01:14 PM


Congratulations once again for your 1,000th post PoetFriend...
I enjoyed reading your poem...
~coco~

Sven
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4 posted 2001-01-30 01:18 PM


vandana, you know that I've waiting for this moment for a very long time. . .

this is truly one of your best. . . the fact that it's your 1,000th just makes it all the more special. . .

CONGRATULATIONS my friend. . . and here's to the next 1,000!!!

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Victoria
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5 posted 2001-01-30 01:32 PM


Congratulations vadana..its always fun to reach 1000..enjoyed your words...

                ~V~

A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)



JamesMichael
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6 posted 2001-01-30 02:14 PM


vandana my hope is for happiness for you a thousand times...James
Janet Marie
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7 posted 2001-01-30 03:07 PM


WAY COOL VANDANA!!! ...
CONGRATS on your 1000th
keep holding on ... keep writing on
take care
jm


If my slight Muse do please these curious days ...
The pain be mine ...
but thine shall be the praise.

~Shakespeare~


Marge Tindal
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8 posted 2001-01-30 03:56 PM


VanDana~
I remember your first post ... and look at you now ! ! !
You are such a welcome addition to our family of poets
and the circle of friendship here.

Much love to you and
Congratulations !
  
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Charisma
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9 posted 2001-01-30 05:53 PM


Congratulations with your 1000th post....fabulous write to celebrate your milestone.....excellent my friend.

Charisma

vandana
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10 posted 2001-01-30 06:08 PM


Thank you all for your replies
Poet deVine
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11 posted 2001-01-30 06:57 PM


Congratulations! And you chose a wonderful poem as your 1000th post. There is a lesson here for all of us.  
Daniel J D
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12 posted 2001-01-30 07:06 PM


Vandana,
You are holding on. Congratulations on 1000, I have enjoyed your work since coming to Passions. Keep smiling and let the ink flow freely.

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

Denise
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13 posted 2001-01-30 10:00 PM


Wooooohoooooo   Congratulations, Vandana!!! Yep, holding on....never give up...we never know what tomorrow will bring!!!

Denise

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14 posted 2001-01-31 07:30 AM


Each change in life is a challenge. But, each change is a new enlightenment, if approached with a positive attitude.
Congrats on 1M posts. Good reading.
Melton

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15 posted 2001-01-31 10:41 AM


Congratulations!!!!!

Kathleen



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