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Soft Hair, Bright Eyes
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Soft Hair, Bright Eyes |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware 
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She has soft hair I love her hair She has bright eyes I love her eyes Are these the best of her? No, not by far Do you know her? Know what makes her laugh? Know what stirs her passion? Know how soft those lips are? What do I know? I know she has crept inside me She knows that What does she do? She brightens my life beyond measure Great souls have wills; feeble ones have only wishes. ~ Chinese Proverb ~ |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Then I'd have to say, she is one lucky lady!  -SEA (beautifully said) |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Wilfred, she is indeed one lucky lady, and I'm convinced her lips could never be as soft as your heart. Write on Great one Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This sounds as if she makes you very, very happy.... enjoyed! |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
SEA- I see me as lucky - thank you Kethry- perhaps I am a softy - but in that I think she outshines me as well - thank you Karilea- in days like these - when happiness is harder to find - that she does - is doubly to her credit- thank you |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Bill--Funny isn't it how happiness is delivered...and some times so simple. Lovely poem! |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Bill...its so nice to see the love flowing here...I think you are both lucky |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Martie- Paula - Your support of my efforts is really appreciated - I truly feel - 'she' appreciates - if you do as well |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Lovely words, one of your best I'd say, Bill! Corinne |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
excellent Sir. . . you do have a way with these. . . ---------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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