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Silently Sitting
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England 
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Silently Sitting < !signature-->The reason this looks okay now is because Margie girl sprinkled her magic on it. Otherwise it wouldn't Thank you love I really appreciate it.  And she threaten to duff me over for telling that she did it Silently Sitting Normally you can hear me Long before you see me But sometimes like now I am quiet I know how I can sit here not talking I don't need to be working But sit here sipping at you Tasting the essence of you Drinking in your glow Quietly you know Silently here No fear No hurries No worries Silently I'll be Sitting silently Normally there's no way That I do not just say But sometimes like now I can shut up I know how I can sit here being still And so today here I will I'll bathe in your words Listen to what I've heard Reach out for your light Hold it in the night No pains No gains Quietly here Still the tear Quietly I'll be Waiting quietly Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning [This message has been edited by Marsha (edited 01-28-2001).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I'm sorry Marsha, but I am afraid I'm going to have to say... I wish I had written this... the calm of it, the quiet which you say you are not...come forth like a comforter on this icy-snowy-blowy morn, and warm me... so, into my library...{~,^} and thank you for the early Sunday morning gift.... |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
I know how it feels  |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari love, you could have done this better love, but I tried even if it was wonky when you read it, I did try. Thank you love as always Take care love Majestic Marsha Rex love, thank you this was a bit of wing stretching from me. And as you saw the shape was as wonky as anything. But I thank you for supporting me Take care love Mushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Marsha~ **smack** Now folks, don't believe a word this girl says ! She's full of WONKY !  Now, girl ... if it was wonky - it is just wonkerful ! I wonkydo one like this ! You wonkydo-wonkydo-wonkydo-do-do ! Hey .... you may just have inspired a new form ! Now ... Marsha ... this is splendid ! I toast you with a glass of ... YOU GUESSED IT ! Wonky~Wine LOL ! You are so fun ! Here's *wonking* at ya' ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Marsha love, this is beautiful. . . so soft in its presentation and so delicate in its words. . . Absolutely wonderful. . . ------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
This is lovely, Marsha, so peaceful! It reminds me of a friend who once said coming home to his wife was like entering a quiet room (and mind you, they had NINE kids!), she was just that gentle and serene. And I don't know how it looked before, but it certainly isn't "wonky" now! To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
You may be sitting quietly but the words you write speak loud and clear...this is BEAUTIFUL love just beautiful |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Marsha! Absoutely your best work! So serene and calm, yet flowing with emotion, love, and need/want. As Sunshine stated...I wish I had written this! jwesley |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Margie girl dear heart you surely didn't think I'd keep it a secret that you had to sprinkle your amazing magic on it. Kari does my editing, Margie does my shapes, anyone else I'm not proud I'll take any help me! And you know you had to show me love, you really did. I thank you and I appreciate it more than I can say. I don't know what I did to deserve such good friends but I'm glad I did it love I really am. And even the smack is a loving tap I know. (What's that expression, gotta love me )Take care love and thanks, and they know you did it, love and stuff Mushy Sven dear heart, I can't often do quiet, it's not normally me, but it's the thought of work calms me down a lot. Thank you love, and this is me doing quiet. Take care love Mushy And you know I won't be for long don't you, yes I know. Marilyn love, it was wonky, very very wonky, if they had been real glasses they wouldn't have stood up and the wine would have leaked out. Thank you love I don't normally manage to convey calm, but this time, I think I did. Take care love Mushy Paula dear heart, I think you might be showing your bias again, but thank you sweetie. This being transformed by Margie so it looks like it should, and not how I left it. But thank you as always love. Take care as always Mushy Jimmy love, thank you that is a compliment that I know I don't deserve, but thank you anyway love. I'm glad the lessons that I'm finally learning are working. Take care love Mushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Hey Nurse you nursed this one right out of the quiet zone and got it down just right.... love to ya.... I really really enjoyed this one! ethome |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
I LOVE IT!!! this is...SUPERB writing my bubbling friend!! this is my new favorite of yours! iloveitiloveitiloveit!! (whats this wonky stuff..i dont get it....  )i just cant tell you enough how much i love this one...very awesome hugs, g "i was thinkin' if you were lonely maybe we could leave here and no one would know at least not to the point where we would think so..." |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
oops! i did so want this in my dgvarner library and i always forget that darned little button..... |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
PT dear heart, this was me doing quiet and it came out, but if you had seen it before it was Margie girled, you would have seen just how wonky it was. But I'm pleased that you love it, I can do quiet just not very often, but you know that. And also not for very long either. Thank you so muchly love Take care Mushy Dee love, what is wonky, (THIS was wonky) it means wobbly, not stable. Like when you go to a restaurant and they give you the table that wobbles, (it always happens to me) that's wonky. Or you're in the supermarket and your trolley is the one with the wheel that gets stuck, that's wonky. Thank you love for wanting to keep this, but you wouldn't want it if it hadn't been Margie girled Take care love Bubbles Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy the read |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Wonky wine....still giggling.... |
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laryalee Member
since 2000-06-19
Posts 352Alberta, Canada |
The outline is so neatly done, but the essence inside is what makes this such a delight! So peaceful and calming. Thank you for the taste! Lary |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Vandana thank you very muchly. I always appreciate you taking the time to reply Take care Mushy Kari dear heart, have a glass of winky wonky wine. :: :: But you know it was wonky Thank you love Take care as always Majestic Marsha wonky very wonky Lary love thank you, It was all down to them being Margie girled, if she hadn't waved her magic wand, they wouldn't have appeared so good. I know the content is important, but they needed all the help they could get. Thank you love Take care love as always Mushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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