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hi shadow. . . |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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hi shadow, I haven't forgotten about you it's just that some of the days have been cloudy lately and the nights really haven't been all that bright either but I know that you weren't really that far away from me you were right there, looking over my shoulder and I could feel your smile hear your voice and hold your hand so I know that you didn't forget about me it's just life it's like that sometimes but as long as you're there I'll always know that I'll have someone to talk to someone to laugh with someone to share my secrets with you know that it's always been you shadow thank you. . . ----------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Alwye
Moderator
Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
I've never looked at a shadow that way before...but you're definitely right, it is like a friend...insightful and well done, I enjoyed this!  *Krista Knutson* I'm a slow dying flower In a frost-killing hour The sweet turning sour and untouchable... -Natalie Merchant |
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Temptress
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Shadows are fun. They're always there..right behind you..  Love this, Sweet Poet Man! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
If perhaps a bit of sun shall bring the shadow closer here I am, now please do run for that is why I chose her... liked this! |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
This made me think of Peter Pan. Hope yours never gets lost.To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Nicely penned and I enjoyed the read... Thank you PoetFriend... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sven~ You brought to mind that little lilting nursery rhyme - I have a little shadow who goes in and out with me. And what can be the use of him, is more than I can see. Love the thoughts wrapped up in this piece. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Alwye, I've recently discovered that shadows can be quite wonderful. . . thanks for reading. . . Temptress, I know. . . and I'm wondering why. . . and if they're giving me bunny ears!! LOL Sunshine, I liked yours too!! Thank you my friend. . . kcsgrandma, Peter Pan. . . yeah, that's it!! I love it!! Thank you!!Coco, you are welcome PoetFriend. . . anytime. . . Marge, there are a lot of thoughts in this. . . thanks for bringing out one of them. . . ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
I'm glad to know that you will never be alone. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
oh yeah remind me on Peter Pan too. don't lose it. loved reading this excellent piece. ((warm hugs)) Charisma |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Shadow walking, soul talking, being with your closest friend, sharing your closest secrets with the one you harbour within; well written Sven. jwesley |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Sven, I have spent many an hour in deep conversation with my shadow, a very reliable and trust worthy friend, also one that never leaves you alone in times of trouble or need, this is a magnificent piece here friend, loved it, keeping it, Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
knowing all about shadows, I say this is very nice. It made me smile big |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This "shadow" has been feeling forgotten... so many thanks for explaining about clouds and such. *S* I love this, Sven... well done! |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Sven, shadow walking, shadow talking what do you know! He's shadow stalking a shadow friend, close like no other unless I could have this shadow lover write on Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Sven dear heart, AD, this is utterly terrific, I love this image, I really love this. I always have been fond of shadows, at least they didn't swipe your lippy, clothes or anything else. Which or course the sisters all did. And they didn't answer back, this is a truly wonderful piece from you. Great comfort in having someone to always relie on. (Well, a shadow is a someone) I love it which goes without saying, and it joins all the others there in my library Thank you for this beauty Take care love as always Mushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
inot2b, I shall indeed never be alone. . . even when I am. . . thank you my friend. . . Charisma, thank you my friend. . . we all need a little Peter Pan in our lives. . . James, thanks for reading my friend. . . sometimes, it seems like they're the only ones that understand. . . Cerenity, thank you so much. . . indeed our shadows are always with us. . . passing shadows, thought that you might like this one. . . glad that I could make you smile. . . suthern, how could anyone forget about you?? thank you my friend. . . Kethry, would that we all could have that one!! Thanks for reading. . . Marsha, Bubbles. . . thank you so much. . .indeed a Shadow is always there. . . and they don't answer back. . . glad that you liked this one. . . thank you. . . ------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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