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g_pimp82
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since 2001-01-18
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0 posted 2001-01-27 11:46 AM



Written with a pen
Sealed with a kiss
I'll be there till the end
I promise you this

Do you love me
Or do you not
You told me once
But I forgot

So tell me now
And tell me true
So I can say...
I love you too

Of all the people
I've ever met
Your the one
I won't foget

And if I die
Before you do
I'll go to heaven
And wait for you

And if...
Youu go to hell
May it be
Just as well

I'll give the angels
Back thier wings
And risk the loss
Of everything

Just to prove
My love is true
To have a lover
As great as you.

dedicated to C.J.J.   01-16-01

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doreen peri
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since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812
Virginia
1 posted 2001-01-27 11:57 AM


WOW!!! you mean this isn't for ME? dammit! i LOVE this... it's wonderful!!! (are you really a pimp? *g)
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2001-01-28 01:41 PM


I'd go all the way to hell for you..Don't think that going to hell idea is too good but this is a nice poem of devotion...James
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