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0 posted 2001-01-26 07:42 PM



It will help to be familiar with the children's book, "Miss Nelson is Missing" when you read this poem.

Crab-Apple Just for You
Virginia Salter

I gots me a crab-apple
for Miss Viola Swamp
on the way to grammar school
goin’ marchin’ with a tromp
cuz’ this is gonna be
her last day in our class
our teacher’s comin’ back
yeah, we’re all gonna pass

‘nd when I gets me there
I’m gonna have some fun
I’ll give Swamp that crab-apple
while she’s standin’ in the sun

the light’ll reflect off it
that apple tidbit in the glare
leaving no choice for us
but to stop and laugh and stare

to Miss Viola Swamp
we’ll gladly bid adieu
yes, me and him and Gerald
and him and me and you

that’s ‘xactly what
we’re gonna do!
yes, me and him and Gerald
and him and me and you


© September  24,  2000

© Copyright 2001 Virginia Salter - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-01-26 08:18 PM


I'm not familiar with the book, Virginia, but I think this is delightful!

Denise

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2 posted 2001-01-26 09:06 PM


I haven't read "Miss Nelson Is Missing" either, but I will have to read it now after reading this wonderful poem! Love the voice in this! Thank you for sharing, my friend!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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3 posted 2001-01-26 09:24 PM


Well thank you both!  Miss Viola Swamp is Miss Nelson's substitute teacher.  She's a real 'witchy' crabby person.

I'm a substitute teacher, so this was kinda fun for me to do.  Though, I kind of hope no one ever wants to give me a crab-apple.  I've been in some classrooms, though, that I could easily have earned one. ;o};o{ LOL

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