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Wilfred Yeats
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0 posted 2001-01-26 01:57 PM



Found in the still night
Perfume scent of love
A Thrill fills my heart
In a forest of darkness
I've found you to love,
In my eyes
My perfect companion

We dance in the wind
Over sparkling springs flowing
Beyond the laws of nature
With the moon in your eyes
Your voice still haunts me

Into bright brilliant daylight
Sun shining through light clouds
A kaleidoscope of color
Our souls will find the path
Bewitched by your action
I seek harmony with you
The fruit of our labor
So beautifully in front of us
Perfect union
Triumph of the will
A final justice fills my soul
The joy of experiencing
Each thrill of you




Great souls have wills; feeble ones have only wishes.

~ Chinese Proverb ~


© Copyright 2001 Wilfred Yeats - All Rights Reserved
serenity blaze
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1 posted 2001-01-26 02:31 PM


Well, Wilfred, you've got me sitting up straight and paying attention!  Thanks for the "Thrill" lovie!  lol...
Paula Finn
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2 posted 2001-01-26 02:40 PM


MMMMMMMM the thought of love like this just THRILLS me to my soul...you know that dont you?

We all have wings...some of us don't know why


Sunshine
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3 posted 2001-01-26 02:45 PM


I do believe

quote:
Into bright brilliant daylight
Sun shining through light clouds
A kaleidoscope of color
Our souls will find the path



that these are my favorite lines!  Well done!

inot2B
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4 posted 2001-01-26 05:53 PM


Your words are always a Thrill for me.
Martie
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5 posted 2001-01-26 08:03 PM


Bill--In the still night many beautiful dreams come true.  
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6 posted 2001-01-26 09:43 PM


Very nice love poem, Will. It sure can be a great feeling, when it works...
Sandra

Wilfred Yeats
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7 posted 2001-01-27 04:16 AM


Everyone -
forgive  me if I give a blanket thanks - -I spend so little time online of late - I hope to have more time soon
Thank you so much for you warm and kind replies

ethome
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8 posted 2001-01-27 06:48 AM


Beautiful romantic love poem Bill! Like you always write so very well with a dash of class and depth of heart....ethome
Wilfred Yeats
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9 posted 2001-01-28 02:19 PM


ethome -
Golly gee - 'class and depth' - ~G~ thank you~S~

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