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Tire Ruts Haiku
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Tire Ruts Haiku |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. 
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Tire ruts in the snow Driving down the narrow path Lead astray with ease 12-3-2000 |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
How true this is, Dennis! I was caught in a lake effect storm along Lake Erie once, and was happy to see other cards on the road, until I realized that they had no more idea than I did whether it really was the road!  You can find inspiration in anything it seems.To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Wow!!! That's a Sunday message in its entirety! Hey, look, tire is in the middle of that word. Anyway, may I copy and share this one with my pastor? It really is a wow I think. |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
i suspect theres more to this haiku than tire ruts...loved the way you put it together(leading astray with ease)....kind of brings multi dimensions to this haiku |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Marilyn, When one ventures out in blizzard conditions, we take our chances following the ruts in the road! thanks for the reply. VAS, I would be honored if you were to share this with your pastor, poetry is best when it is shared with a friend! Kaile, Yes, I wrote this wondering how it would be interpeted since several meanings could be implied, one should wisely pick the the path they chose to follow! You have a sharp eye my friend! Thanks for your comment. [This message has been edited by Dennis L. White (edited 12-03-2000).] |
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