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A Whisper's Caress
Senior Member

since 2000-11-03

Posts 791
on the horizon of a fairytale

0 posted 2000-12-02 12:24 PM

My Soul Companion…

Standing before you, I
see the potential for
you to capture my heart.

With an ever-so-slight
motion, a swift wave of
your wand above my head.
Magic glitters the air
Like dust in the sunlight
through a window.

You have cast your spell.

Fascination takes hold of me,
and lifts me beyond the
height of any dream.

My spirit becomes lost in
the clouding of your mind.
Clouding conceived in doubt.

Do you want me?
Yes – no - yes

As I float through the maze
that is the faltering of your heart,
my body twists and turns,
hoping to seduce your very core.

Searching incessantly for
the soul companion to my own,
I know it is then all doubt
will diffuse. As the faltering
heart and clouded mind conform
to the lost love of an old soul.

Annie Lehberg
achildsheart
6-18-00

Look within the heart of a poet, and you will see a reflection of their soul.

Elizabeth

Moderator

Member Ascendant

since 1999-06-07

Posts 6871
Minnesota

1 posted 2000-12-02 12:27 PM

quote:
With an ever-so-slight
motion, a swift wave of
your wand above my head.
Magic glitters the air
Like dust in the sunlight
through a window.

I really liked those lines...you talked about magic in your poem, and they really did seem magical.

[This message has been edited by Elizabeth (edited 12-02-2000).]

Irie
Senior Member

since 1999-12-01

Posts 1493
Washington State

2 posted 2000-12-02 12:33 PM

Reading this gave me wonderful visions of a magical moment.
This is excellent AWC.

~Sheri

"The things that come to those that wait may be the things
left by those who got there first"

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

3 posted 2000-12-02 12:38 PM

As I float through the maze
that is the faltering of your heart,
my body twists and turns,
hoping to seduce your very core.

Searching incessantly for
the soul companion to my own,
I know it is then all doubt
will diffuse. As the faltering
heart and clouded mind conform
to the lost love of an old soul.
=============

this is beautiful!!!
such lovely expressions of longing
wonderful writing of emotion
take care
jm

I looked into the sky for my anthem
The words and music came through
But words and music can never touch the beauty that I've seen
Looking into you

A Whisper's Caress
Senior Member

since 2000-11-03

Posts 791
on the horizon of a fairytale

4 posted 2000-12-02 06:44 PM

Ladies,
thank you, I am so happy you enjoyed this.

Look within the heart of a poet, and you will see a reflection of their soul.

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

5 posted 2000-12-02 06:49 PM

My spirit becomes lost in
the clouding of your mind.
Clouding conceived in doubt.

Do you want me?
Yes – no - yes

As I float through the maze
that is the faltering of your heart,
my body twists and turns,
hoping to seduce your very core.

I know this feeling too

Thank you, Annie for sharing

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

Poeminister
Senior Member

since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

6 posted 2000-12-02 07:06 PM

A Whisper's Caress,
You invoke such beautiful, poingniant visions in the readers mind with this...very beautiful...enjoyed this muchly.

take care
Poeminister

"...no single sound too rude upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls-
O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love."
-Poe

snowpants
Member Elite

since 2000-09-16

Posts 2061
KS

7 posted 2000-12-02 07:30 PM

'Standing before you, I
see the potential for
you to capture my heart.

With an ever-so-slight
motion, a swift wave of
your wand above my head.
Magic glitters the air
Like dust in the sunlight
through a window.'

Beautiful image, AWC!  How true it is when that One has grabbed our attention!  Love this!!

sp

'cause I am hanging on every word you say, and, even if you don't want to speak tonight, that's alright, alright with me...

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

8 posted 2000-12-02 10:55 PM

WhispersCaress~

'With an ever-so-slight
motion, a swift wave of
your wand above my head.
Magic glitters the air
Like dust in the sunlight
through a window.

You have cast your spell.'

Indeed ... it is enchanting.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

9 posted 2000-12-02 10:59 PM

*sigh* beautiful indeed and so very true. I know this search and these feelings well. Thank you so very much for the read. Much love to you from me.

Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

10 posted 2000-12-02 11:24 PM

AWC,

This was beautiful writing. My you find your soulmate and live in happiness always.

LW

Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats

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