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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855
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Every girl wants to be a princess. Every boy wants to be a king, living in a castle of his own building with his queen. Every night alone hurts the healing. Makes me feel like I've never belonged. Every night leaves me crying. Forever seems so long. But I won't give up hope that someday I'll hold her in my arms. Be able to hug her and kiss her, Love her and miss her, free and calm. I know I'm probably just romanticizing, Fantasizing so the truth won't be true. But I do know things seem better when I think of you. I won't give up hope that someday I'll find her, and someday she'll find me, too. What we've learned: all we can share. Everything, always. I do. Then I'll be able to hug her and kiss her, our lips meeting and letting go. But they will always meet again. And so can we, after this winter, I know. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Mike--anticipation...smiles...a sweet agony. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
S'en, Amazing what watching Anastasia on Fox11 can do to ya.  Glad you enjoyed.Mike |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Every night alone hurts the healing. Makes me feel like I've never belonged. Every night leaves me crying. Forever seems so long. But I won't give up hope that someday I'll hold her in my arms. Be able to hug her and kiss her, Love her and miss her, free and calm. ============== Then I'll be able to hug her and kiss her, our lips meeting and letting go. But they will always meet again. And so can we, after this winter, I know. ============== amazing .... yes indeed ... I need to watch if it will inspire gifts like this... sweet read indeed. me I looked into the sky for my anthem The words and music came through But words and music can never touch the beauty that I've seen Looking into you |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Hey, Butterfly Slippers. Glad you enjoyed. I gotta admit, even I'm surprised I turned this out. Mike |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Mike- this is great... i really enjoyed it much.. ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Mike~ This is wonderful ! When is the re-run ??? I want to catch some of this inspiration. I was watching football ... darn !  Good show, sir. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* oh yes, someday you will hold her close and never let her go. This was beautiful and romantic. Much love to you from me. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Well done! Mike...very nice yearning appeal to this wistful poem....nice structure so well crafted......ethome |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Glad you enjoyed, Vicky. Marge, I don't know if it will be a rerun. But you can always buy it (or get it as a gift). Startime, I struck a chord, I see. ethome, Thanks for the compliment on the craft. And thanks for reading. Mike |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Mike~ this is gorgeous!! I think this is among my favorites from you! Very romantic......I like this side of you....hope you do more like this!  -SEA |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
SEA, it all depends. Mike |
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