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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
 Illuminating in mist at night Captivating passion of amethyst skies Effervescently in pensive mind Caging hearts become entwined Rafting in streams of lover's dew Yearnings echo in moments so few Shadowing stillness of once jaded love Twinkling a future in distance beyond Alluring emotions tempestuously new Lofting in fantasy of eyes green and blue Spiraling a romance in crystalline hues... [This message has been edited by CocoBaci (edited 12-01-2000).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Oh my COCO.... this is EXQUISITE ... your imagery is absolutely stunning my dear and each wonderful image is laced and woven with threads of passion and subtle sensuality and the flow of your rhyme is an added treat. excellent writing!! this jewel goes in my keeper file  jm Sprayed across my heart and hers Danced butterflies in the wild This angel, this woman , who loves me with the innocence of a child. ~DeVante~ |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
This is enchanting Coco...just wonderful |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
So pretty Coco..love the pic too..  ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Robert Joseph Member
since 2000-10-07
Posts 491South Carolina |
CoCo...Lovely work, I enjoyed each word. Love the picture, as well! Robert Joseph |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Very nice Coco Reminds me of a sunset sky. Rich |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
1derful! Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Excellent Coco!! This shimmers and sparkles with all the qualities that are you. . . "Spiraling a romance in crystalline hues". . . I love that!!! --------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Wow! Loved the winter imagery. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Dani~ Oh, my goodness - how lovely this is. Crystalizing with such uniqueness ~ just as each snowflake that forms. Your talent shines brightly here. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Is this ever pretty Coco! "Rafting in streams of lover's dew." great lines and images in this one...I really enjoyed this so much... ethome |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
Yeah!!!! ~*Irie jumps up and down with excitement!*~ I Love it. Awesome acrostic, beautifuly written Coco! ~Sheri "The things that come to those that wait may be the things left by those who got there first" |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Wonderful Coco! What a beautifully descriptive acrostic ... I loved the wording in this lovely piece! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Coco, so glad this came back up...adding to library this crystalline piece... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Just as each snowflake shares with us a different beauty than the others you have shared with us the most beautiful acrostic that I have ever read. I truely mean that and it shall remain in my library under "PERFECTION". I have read this 4 times already and I assure you that I will be reading it over and over again. A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses. author unknown |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
i like c oco's e xtra c ool r ite y ou s hould t oo a l ot s ays me |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
My goodness, I am so touched by all of your endearing comments... I would answer each of you individually, but it would be difficult for me to express the emotions and this rapid beat that my heart has at this instant kinda is distracting me Just know this dear Poets, your friendship is treasured each and every day or should I say nite since I tend to roam these halls at wee hours of the morn I'm ecstatic that you all like this poem I wrote... Hugs2U |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Good day. A very lovely poem. Enjoyed the read. Poeminister< !signature--> "...no single sound too rude upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls- O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love." -Poe [This message has been edited by Poeminister (edited 12-04-2000).] |
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