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Sven
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0 posted 2000-12-01 12:20 PM


she really doesn't belong here
she doesn't belong
to this time
    to this plane
        to this life
she belongs                       there
                                         there on that other plane
                                         there where her life is celebrated
                                         there she is worshipped
                                         there her light fills the sky
                                         she is
here
here on this plane
here it seems harder
here it seems longer
here there seems to be only darkness
                        but        from there
                                            she draws the light
                                            she draws the life
                                            she draws the strength
                                            she needs

here
to light the sky
to fill the life
to fight the fight

here
    she speaks to one
poet of word
    painter of life
        knower of roads
            singer of love

she speaks to him
and fills him with the spirit of
        her life and her love

many do not understand the
way that they walk
        but do they need to?
for they walk their own way
        poet and goddess
        not together
        but parallel
parallel, but joined together
        in the spirit
            a spirit of joy and love
                of peace and harmony
                    for all eternity

and so
here she is                                                            there she is
                 she lives                                  she lives
                               she laughs  she laughs
                                         she loves

maybe she really does belong here. . .

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl





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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2000-12-01 12:25 PM


Oh yes, indeed, Isis belongs most certainly here...Yes!

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2000-12-01 01:57 PM


Sven I was beginning to wonder when you where going to write this one about Isis..I know you have written about her before...these are lovely words for a lovely women that deserves all the blessings this world has to offer and one has already been fulfilled within your friendship...James
Kethry
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since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
3 posted 2000-12-01 02:25 PM


Sven,
She is Isis, goddess of the Dawn, And you are Sir Sven Sword of Truth.

Write on
Kethry.


Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant - Thoreau


Passions Voice
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since 2000-10-23
Posts 291
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4 posted 2000-12-01 05:26 PM


This is very good.  

You do seem to know your subjects very well.

passion is life. . . ~Diana


Janet Marie
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5 posted 2000-12-01 06:05 PM


YES...you have done her gentle kind ways justice...as I knew You could...
Lisa was one of the first people I met in passions and in my early days of posting in DP..she was the light that shined and tended to her flock of sad poets with a soft guidence...
wonderfully done..perfect presentation
this is one of my favs of your gallery.
jm

Sprayed across my heart and hers
Danced butterflies in the wild
This angel, this woman ,
who loves me with the innocence of a child.
~DeVante~

Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
6 posted 2000-12-01 09:52 PM


Dear Sven,
What a beautiful moving tribute hon. I'm tickled pink, thanks so much
And thankyou Sunshine, Janet Marie, James, Kethry and Passions Voice for the kind comments too.
If I have done nothing else right in my life, I certainly did two things right here in Passions - coming here in the first place and making true friends as wonderful as our
Sir Sven.
*hugs*
Isis

*I believe every time you put your words to paper, you change. Each feeling is set free, and you may follow.....*
~Isis~~Sovereign of the Spirit.

Irie
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since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493
Washington State
7 posted 2000-12-02 01:32 AM


Fantastic Sven.....
It's nice to get to know these poets from your words!
Wonderful people, wonderful you!  

~Sheri

"The things that come to those that wait may be the things
left by those who got there first"



Sven
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8 posted 2000-12-02 12:54 PM


Sunshine, indeed she does. . .

James, yes, I have written about and for Isis several times before. . . she has always been my friend, and I could not do this series without including her. . . thank you my friend. . .

Kethry, yes she is my friend. . . yes she is. . .

PV, I know this one very well. . .  

Jan, thank you. . . Lisa was also the first person that I met here in Dark. . . her light still shines to any that will seek. . . glad that you liked. . .

Irie, I'm glad that you're getting to know these wonderful people through my words. . . I know so many of them. . . thank you my friend. . .

Lisa, the words just don't exist to tell you what you've done in my life. . . I've tried. . . but there always seems to be so much more than I can say in just words. . . you've always been there for me, a true friend and a kindred spirit. . . a heart of gold, and a light that shines always. . . thank you for everything. . . and I hope that we'll always be friends till the end. . . thank you. . .  

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


tracie66
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713
Australia
9 posted 2000-12-20 04:04 AM


Sven~
Doing some catching up and the first one I had to read was this one for Isis...You have done her proud my friend, this truly is most beautiful and most fitting...well done
~HUG~
Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



kaile
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10 posted 2000-12-20 11:26 AM


i have no hesitation in saying thatt this is one of the best poems i have read from you so far...simply breath-taking and awe-inducing....
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