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Daniel J D
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0 posted 2000-11-30 09:40 PM



Bound for Heaven.

Give of yourself to those who've hurt you
Offer an olive branch to your neighbour
Set free a white dove holding the hand of the enemy
Appreciate other humans with love and honour
Cast away hatred to the depths of the unknown
Let the winds of love allow you to sail
In oceans where only goodwill prevail  
And colours of rainbows forever shine

~~Daniel J D~~




Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2000-11-30 10:21 PM


Daniel, this is going into my library...I certainly hope you don't mind...

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




Butterflies_dont_cry
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2 posted 2000-11-30 10:24 PM


Daniel* You have said in so few lines what
it has taken me...and will take many...years
and years to see...I never realized that
once I let the past go I also took back the
power that I had given those that hurt
me, because if I had I would have done it LONG
ago...this is outstanding~
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The best and most beautiful things
in the  world cannot be seen or even touched
---- they must be felt  with the heart~
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[This message has been edited by Butterflies_dont_cry (edited 11-30-2000).]

Daniel J D
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3 posted 2000-11-30 10:34 PM


Sunshine,
Thank you, I am so glad you like this one, you have made my day.

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

Daniel J D
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4 posted 2000-12-01 12:01 PM


Butterflies,
Heaven is a real long way for many people. We have the opportunity here on earth to get there. The answer is simply love and forgiveness. I am so glad you enjoyed this short poem.

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

Victoria
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5 posted 2000-12-01 12:15 PM


lovely JD...and so true...your poems always touch my heart...HUGS

               ~Victoria~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)


JamesMichael
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6 posted 2000-12-01 12:19 PM


I was talking to my friend Maria the other day and she was glowing and she told me she was feeling so much better after deciding to forgive her ex and stop blaming everything on him...James
CocoBaci
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7 posted 2000-12-01 12:19 PM


Daniel, beautiful expression in this rhyme...

I'm threading this poem and I thank you for this read...
Coco

Daniel J D
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8 posted 2000-12-01 12:35 PM


Victoria,
Thank you so much. I really appreciate your comments.

James,
Is not it wonderful how just a little give from us makes such a difference.

CocoBaci,
I am honoured, thank you.

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

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9 posted 2000-12-01 12:40 PM


JD~
'Offer an olive branch to your neighbour'

Oh, my friend, it really is that easy, isn't it ?
Thank you for the validation of my heart.
Enjoyed the read.
~*Marge*~



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Paula Finn
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10 posted 2000-12-01 01:49 AM


HUGS Daniel...this is lovely and speaks straight to my heart...thank you
Daniel J D
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11 posted 2000-12-01 02:16 AM


Marge,
Thank you so very much. Always great to see your comments. There are many olive branches that need to be given out there.

Paula,
I am so glad you like this, I appreciate your wonderful words each and every time.

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

Trew
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12 posted 2000-12-01 02:32 AM


I've been holding a grudge or two lately...
For no really good reasons. As is the case with all grudges, I suppose.
It was the title that drew me into this poem, but it was not what I was expecting.  A beautifully written piece, Daniel.
To be honest, it caught me a little off guard.  Thank you...
You brought a little more focus and a little more colour to the jaded images I've been seeing lately.

Trev.

Daniel J D
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13 posted 2000-12-01 03:47 AM


Trew,
Heaven is for all of us, everyone on earth has a place there. We have to work for it though. I know it is not easy, but we can make a difference to many people's lives and ours by offering that olive branch. Thank you for your wonderful words. Cheers

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

vlraynes
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14 posted 2000-12-02 03:28 AM



Daniel-
   oh my...such truth and wisdom
   within these words..
   beautiful, my friend..

   hugs,
   ~vicky




"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes



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15 posted 2000-12-02 04:56 AM


I don't know where you get your inspiration from, but I love it.  Your pieces always manage to move me.  This is just a beautiful words of wisdom piece.  Thank you for sharing it.

Love,
Lady


Live in my world just once and you'll find yourself enraptured.


Daniel J D
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16 posted 2000-12-03 06:57 PM


Vlraynes,
Thank you so much. It only takes a just a fraction of time to show love and compassion.

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

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