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Startime
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0 posted 2000-11-30 02:47 PM


Words
Karen Torbiak
2000

Words given by friends who care
that life and laughter each share
to listen, hear pain and need
friends then give love words to feed

Words shared from heart to soul
filled with understanding flow
that said to heart of sweet life
to soothe away stress and strife

Words that touch every heart
from friends who care, never part
given life upon the page
bringing smiles in any age

Words that touch the tender heart
giving love a place to start
sweet and whispered so dear
to open up, have no fear

Words holding close, love divine
bringing love in life to shine
said from hearts honest and pure
gentle love from one is sure

Words touched with passions fire
love burns bright never to tire
love stars that burn very bright
spoken both in day and night

Words start passion heat flowing
said from one who smiles, knowing
spoken, set body aflame
that passion be without shame

Words of friendship said with love
brought together from above
put together for this chance
to share in the friendship dance

Words we read from screen each day
knowing you from what you say
held to heart with tenderness
soften heart with gentleness

Words you write I hold most dear
your words never bringing fear
strong you write, showing me light
with power you tell of right



Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. [URL=http://path2riches.com]http://path2riches.com

© Copyright 2000 Karen Torbiak - All Rights Reserved
Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song
1 posted 2000-11-30 03:02 PM


This was so wonderful to read realizing that it came from your heart in celebration to the wonderful weaves we are treated to within these walls.  Truely enjoy reading the works of one that not only writes so well but sincerely finds reading others works so rewarding.  Thank you for sharing this one with us.

A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses.
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SEA
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2 posted 2000-11-30 03:02 PM


Startime~         Huge smiles with this sweet poem....hugs to you   -SEA
Charisma
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3 posted 2000-11-30 03:18 PM


Startime
you create a wonderful poem with words, penned from your heart and its a real pleasure to read.
GREAT work.

Charisma

ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
4 posted 2000-11-30 04:00 PM


Wonderful write about the poets here Karen.. they do everything with words just as you have written them so well here....nice to see this kindness pouring from your heart once again...I missed it a lot....thanks for the tribute to Passions it truly is a wonderful place......take care...ethome......
Startime
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5 posted 2000-11-30 06:17 PM


Mark
Thank you so very much. I have found the poets here so very loving I just had to tell them. Much love to you from me.

SEA
You are amazing and have been so inspiring to me, dear one.Much love to you from me.

Charisma
Thank you so very much, dear one. Your comments and poems always touch my heart. Much love to you from me.

Eric
Thank you so much, dear one. You are so very right. The poets here are filled with hearts of pure love. I love the feeling I get from them and their wonderful words. I feel filled with love for all of them. Much love to you, my friend, from me.




Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com


Lone Wolf
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6 posted 2000-11-30 09:27 PM


startime,

This was awesome!!  So true that we know each other from words alone, yet they are always enough which is why this is a true circle of friends!!  

LW


Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats

Sven
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7 posted 2000-11-30 10:55 PM


Startime, you have seen what makes Passions what it is. . . not just the words. . . but the poets themselves. . . this is unlike any place that we've ever been. . . which is why we'll probably never leave. . .  

Wonderful words. . .

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


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