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Strength
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC 
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"Strength" You have the strength to make it I see it in your eyes and in your heart Take this chance and grasp it Time for a brand new start A new road you're going to travel One with blue and sunny skies No more broken hearts and shattered dreams The chains around you to be broken No more unbearable pain or earth shattering lies By your side I shall stand Never to leave, this I promise you Forever I am going to love Chasing away those tears of blue The light around you shines so bright I smile when I look upon your heavenly face Knowing you have what it takes to fight And you'll do it with style and grace Never give up, keep your chin high We'll climb the mountains together, each and every one So, lets get started Our brand new life has begun Laura, I love you! |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Uplifting and hope-filled piece. Very nicely woven! |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Amy, This is so beautifully written. Deep within you portray a very strong and determined person. She must be proud of you, never give up. "Never give up, keep your chin high We'll climb the mountains together, each and every one So, lets get started Our brand new life has begun" Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
A strong testament to support, determination and love, I enjoyed it. Thank you. Regards, Olias |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
you know why I love this one Amy. . .  ------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
Amy in many situations it does take a strong determination, but when there is love that makes it a whole lot better. |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
The strength of a caring and loving soul shines through!!! Lovely and wonderful work Pepper "A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth." Percy Bysshe Shelley |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Amy, oh girl this is stunning, such a wonderfully well written poem from you. You have talent in plenty, you have strength and power. Very well done Amy, absolutely beautiful. Love this one, your spirit shines through. Take care Mushy Marsha  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Amy, powerful, victorious and stunning. What else can I say? Write on Kethry Why do yesterdays remain and todays pass by ...unnoticed? Rex E. Alford |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
where this is the love of two ... there is nothing you cant do. you already know I love this one ... the poet as well  stay strong ... fly free me |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Amy, your gifts keep giving... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
VAS- thank you for reading and for your flattering comment. Daniel- i am proud of myself too. Thank you as always for your generous and caring comment. OLIAS- glad you enjoyed. thank you for taking the time to read and respond. It is much appreciated. Sven- yes i do...same reason as to why i love your poetry. take care my friend. Rosebud- yes it does...much better! Thanks for your kind comment. Peppermint- thank you for the "lovely" and the "wonderful". Much appreciated. Marsha... wow "stunning" huh...you are too kind! Thank you for your continued support and friendship. It means so much to me! Janet- yes the strength of our love can overcome anything. I love you too my sweet friend. Thank you for always reading and responding to my work. Love ya bunches! Sunshine- and your beautiful comment is a gift. Take care. Love ya all ~me~ |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
What a wonderfully inspirational piece Amy! Rising to meet the challenges ... fighting head-on ... loved the positive power in these words, well done! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
kit-- thanks for your lovely reply. and also for your support and encouragement. it means the world to me. take care. ~amy~ |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
AMY, this is inspiring, uplifing, heart tugging, and well what can I say it's a great write dear friend... As always you make me smile reading your poetic words... Coco |
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dragonpoe Senior Member
since 2000-11-12
Posts 608Palm Bay, Florida |
I agree with all the other comments on the uplifting quality of this piece. To me, I read it as a parent, encouraging their child who is venturing out into the world and learning what it's all about. A piece of guidance, support and love. Nice work With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free.. dragonpoe |
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ParisGrl Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 610 |
Amy, Sweetheart, i loved this poem and i love you too. As Always, Laura |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'By your side I shall stand Never to leave, this I promise you Forever I am going to love Chasing away those tears of blue' Hey Aim! I must have missed this one! Absolutely beautiful expression of love!!Excellent writing, my dear friend! -e ~~~~~ 'cause I am hanging on every word you say, and, even if you don't want to speak tonight, that's alright, alright with me... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
yes, there isn't much more I can add, I loved your warm and heartfelt words also. ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
thank you all for your kind words. you all are the best. love ya much... ~amy~ |
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