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soozieque_28
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since 2000-11-28
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0 posted 2000-11-30 11:17 AM


This is another one inspired by my fiance...he drives over the road and is gone quite a bit.

My days are filled with thoughts of you
When your'e not here I feel so blue
My nights are full of lonliness
I long to feel your sweet caress
I wish to hold you oh so tight
Want to be next to you in the night
Your smile is something I really miss
I miss your touch and want your kiss
Come home safely where you belong
Without you, my heart's music has no song


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SEA
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1 posted 2000-11-30 11:20 AM


Awe......this is so sweet! You should give this to him   -SEA
vandana
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2 posted 2000-11-30 11:30 AM


Liked it!!!!!!!!!
serenity blaze
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3 posted 2000-11-30 11:34 AM


I agree.  This is sweet and a hug of a poem. You SHOULD give this to him, so he can keep it with him on the road. Heart warming, m'friend!
ethome
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since 2000-05-14
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New Brunswick Canada
4 posted 2000-11-30 05:19 PM


Take it from a guy you should give it to him I agree with the rest of the replies...he's going to love it whether he says so or not... it's a very nice warm poem...ethome
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