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Open Poetry #11

Your Love Saved Me

soozieque_28
Junior Member

since 2000-11-28

Posts 28
Tennessee

0 posted 2000-11-29 08:39 PM

This poem was written for my fiance when we were first together.Just a couple of months earlier, I had lost my three year old son, who was killed in a wreck when his dad was drinking and driving.

You are the one who dried my tears
And because of you I overcame my fears
You brought back laughter and restored my joy
I was such a mess when I lost my little boy
But you came along as if by fate
Put love in my soul where there was hate
You taught me once again how to smile
And I knew I'd be okay again after a while.

soozieque_28
Junior Member

since 2000-11-28

Posts 28
Tennessee

1 posted 2000-11-29 11:58 PM

I feel weird posting on my own poem...I'm new to the forms , and I think this is the only way I can add this poem to my library...Vain of me, I know...I'm sorry

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2000-11-30 10:26 AM

Soozieque_28~ I can't even begin to say how this ripped at my heart........to say I'm sorry about your son, seems so small, and just not enough.....this is a beautiful poem, thank you for sharing this with us.

-SEA

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

3 posted 2000-11-30 10:47 AM

Enjoyed the read!!!!!!!!!!

Tony Abbot
Member

since 2000-11-18

Posts 209
North Wales,UK

4 posted 2000-11-30 10:50 AM

This was very raw and emotionally honest.Thanks for sharing it with us.

'Humankind cannot bear too much reality' T.S.Eliot

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