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Give A Little Bit
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Give A Little Bit |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas 
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Give A Little Bit Why don't you give a little bit, break down and cry with me, show some emotion, open up your heart, try to love me, love me, as I love you. I know he hurt you but don't let it tear apart what we both know. Just give a little bit, please let me love you, comfort and hold you; take my hand baby, just take this hand... and I'll always be your man. w. james beard, jr. © November 2000 |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
OK!!! Come Love me Sweetie!  Ok, well, I tried,  I really felt this and thought it was very sweet! -SEA |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I posted and it didn't go up......hmmmmmm. here, I'll try to bump it up now!  |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
I can hear you, and I am glad that I have seen this before it fade away....heartfelt poem, and so familiar. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Enjoyed it!!!!!!!! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Felt these same feelings many times...we are not all in the same giving position due to circumstances in our lives and differences in our personalities. James |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
James, I hope she hears your heartfelt plea my friend. This was very lovely. LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Excellent, sincere emotions expressed here, good sir.......... |
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