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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Simon Says < !signature-->one line rhymed like prime wine held in crystal fine dip of fingertip into the wine brought to the lip to linger long then sipped strong then slipped into oblivion on an island with one heaven sent bent to lift life to a summit now to commit gently to be lowered again to earth? never, ever Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ [This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 11-29-2000).] |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari, this is stunning love, it really and truly is, absolutely stunning. This is so utterly fine, I adore this one. take care Majestic Marsha   Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
The truly great rhyme never dies..neither word nor flesh..it lives in our posterity and so, we live with it. the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh. . . A draught like no other. . . ----------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Sunshine~ You blow me away........this is wonderful.  -SEA |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
What an imagination you have!!!!!! What is that you express in your eyes? It seems to me more than all the words I have read in my life. Walt Whitman |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Imagination, vocabulary, a poet's mind, a well phrased verse, originality, lessee ... should I go on? Not if you don't want a swelled head. WOW! Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Marsha, you use stunning like no one else...thank you!... Pegasus...what a lovely comment, thank you... Sven, hopefully I'll pour another.... SEA...my name isn't BREEZE...LOL...come back!... Irish Rose...why Thank You...< !signature--> Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ [This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 11-29-2000).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Interloper, don't worry, sweet soul...I've got many around who keep me humble...but I sure shine in your remarks....thank you...  and if you keep this up, I may have to write one for you... in fact... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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