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John Yaws
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0 posted 2000-11-28 06:03 PM



I think with age the things I saw
Grow clearer in my mind.
I see through mists, things then unseen-
New beauty now I find.

The hawk against a cloudless sky
The quick flight of a deer.
The falling stars I’ve watched at night-
Which seemed so very near.

And people? Ah, a fickle lot
I see it in myself.
The miles and years flew swiftly by
And stole my youth and health.

Moments savored long ago-
I taste from time to time.
And how we parted matters not-
The memory’s still sublime.

The Painted Desert, ruddy hued-
I have it still within.
Sometimes it helps to set my mood,
An old and trusted friend.

My saddle partners, some long dead-
Still gather round at night.
Indeed I see things clearer now-
My memory’s my delight.

© Copyright 2000 John R. Yaws - All Rights Reserved
jwesley
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1 posted 2000-11-28 06:06 PM


My man!!!  Absolutely Perfect!  Change nothing. Mucho APPLAUSE!!!

jwesley

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2 posted 2000-11-28 06:07 PM


This is a wonderful piece. Memories are great treasures, aren't they? You describe them well. Thanks for posting.

"Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather
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Denise
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3 posted 2000-11-28 07:56 PM


I know what you mean! Good one, John!

Denise

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4 posted 2000-11-29 07:19 PM


yeah I can see clearly too...
you have penned one wonderful piece, superb

Charisma

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soozieque_28
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5 posted 2000-11-29 08:20 PM


great poem...
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6 posted 2000-12-01 02:59 AM


Slinger~
Yes !

'Indeed I see things clearer now-
My memory’s my delight.'


Yes !  Yes !
Just perfect !
~*Marge*~



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vlraynes
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7 posted 2000-12-02 03:37 AM



Gunslinger-
  ah yes...where would we be
  without our memories...
  this is just wonderful..

  ~vicky




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heart, you have not truely met the poet."
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8 posted 2000-12-02 08:14 AM


Sir, thank you for this...it's being placed in my library...

Karilea
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I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




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