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Soft And Tender |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Soft And Tender ~*Marge Tindal*~ Soft and tender - I surrender to your kisses across my shoulder making me feel so wanted and perhaps just a little bit bolder The easy way - you display your love with affection flowing making it easy to want to be just where this moment is going So eagerly - I agree responding to your kisses warm and tender unto this rapture of delight Soft and tender - I surrender ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Marge, I surrender already! I ain't never gonna be able to compete with poetry this wonderful. Write on Kethry Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant - Thoreau |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah Marge.... quote: too true...it's what you do... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Soft and Tender indeed, Marge, warm and gentle too. Words of love. jwesley |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
You put into words just how it is. I've been surrendering for over 30 years and it's sooo soft and tender. You have such a way with words. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Yes Marge, this is wonderful! I love how you do what you do!  -SEA |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge--You do have a soft and tender heart...love the poem! |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
You wear soft and tender so very well my friend...this is so beautiful!! The best and most beautiful things in the world cannot be seen or even touched ---- they must be felt with the heart~ *??* |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
This was beautiful Marge. I so love reading your Soft and Tender side. |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
you sure know how to spoil us with your love poetry....  this thought just came to me the other day...i have mostly seen love poetry from you...mi think that you must be a real happy-go-lucky gal in real life for most people find it easier to express their dark sides.... excuse my ramblings...LOL |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Enjoyed it a lot!!!!!!!!  |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Marge~ Your tender poetic heart glows in this one. Beautiful...as always. Deb |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
SIGH....soft and tender suits you so very well |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
soft and tender, just as the person who wrote it, great and wonderful poem Marge... ((hugs)) Charisma |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Such a beautiful love poem, Marge! It makes me want to go out and find someone to "surrender" to! (j/k) Seriously, this is a wonderful piece by a wonderful lady. Thanks for posting. "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Marge, this is one of your excellant, wonderful, poems and I really love it. You do these so well, it's utterly fabulous. Take care Mushy Marsha  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Marge, Very lovely and tender. Enjoyed this much... Poeminister "...no single sound too rude upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls- O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love." -Poe |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kethry~ LOL ! You do just fine girly-girl ! Thanks. Karilea~ I sure try. Thanks for noticing, my friend. JWesley~ You are sweet to think so. INot2B~ The surrender is so easy, huh ? Thank you so much for the compliment. SEA~ Thank ya', gal. I appreciate your thoughts. Martie~ You know I'm a softie ! *Hugs* ButterfliesDC~ Thank you. I think it fits me best. KitKat~ I'm glad to share it with you all. Kaile~ LOL @ spoiling you ! I am a happy person and that little love muse just insists on riding in my car and whispering lovey stuff to me ! *I think I'll post a dark one just to prove to you that I've got 'em ! VanDana~ You and soft and tender go together, my friend. BloomingRose~ Thank you for seeing it, sweet lady. Paula~ Oh, I thank you, hon. Charisma~ Y'all are just too nice ! But I love it ! LoveBug~ LOL ! Go for it gal ! Thanks. Marsha~ I do appreciate the FAB from you ! PoeMinister~ Thanks so much. *My heartfelt thanks to each of you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
Tastfully Tender Tindals... What's for breakfast Marge..? I'm tired of oatmeal, got any rice crispies or frosted flakes..? love always, bubba |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautiful, Marge!! Denise |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Marge- 'unto this rapture of delight Soft and tender - I surrender' lovely, as usual, my friend... love and hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
This poem is written the same as the title Marge...Soft and Tender....very sensuous and provocative work...exciting read!!! ethome |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lucky~ How's about a Western Omlette ??? Yum ! But, hey ... Rice Krispies are my favorite ! I like to eat breakfast BEFORE I go to bed - keeps ya' from having to putz-round in the kitchen in the morning ! Except for that COFFEE ! Denise~ Thanks, my friend. Vicky~ You sure know how to pick a favorite verse. Mine too ! ETHome~ I appreciate your reply. Thanks, sweet poet. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A soft and tender flow of words...James |
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