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Straigten It Out
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Straigten It Out |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC 
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"Straighten it Out" Sit down here girl and talk to me Tell me what's on your mind And don't tell me it's nothing Things haven't been right for a very long time You been acting so strange lately We talk, but in circles we continue to go How can I understand When whatever is wrong, is something I don't know Let's straighten this out, before it's too late Please just let me in like you use to before Don't say it's over Can't bear to hear the sound of a closing door So many things going through my head I need time just as you do But please do not ever forget Just how much I truly love you |
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Celeste Senior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 597 |
Very well written, Aimster. Emotion flows beautifully through this.......Really enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing it.. To capture and live a moment is truly living |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Have you been looking into my world, Amy!? Good one! Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
"Sit down here girl and talk to me..." If only it were so easy! Well done my friend, enjoyed the read here, and the feelings. jwesley |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Amy love, things will work out, just keep the faith, and I know you will. True love doesn't happen every day, so when it does hold on and don't let it slip through your fingers. Take care Mushy This is a fantastic, excellant write from you as always. And I love it  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Always remember what's important my friend. . . that's all you need to do. . . Another great one from you. . . --------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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