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Sven
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0 posted 2000-11-26 11:18 PM


days of raisins
         and almonds
      come together

sprinkled with the
         powdered sugar
      of joys

and held together
         with the
      silky carmel
         of shared
             existence

these are what
       the chocolate
                memories
of her life
      are
           made
                   of

come,
         taste. . .

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl



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Poeminister
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1 posted 2000-11-26 11:27 PM


Nicely done, Sven, you've penned sweetness.  Lovey tribute.

Poeminister


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O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love."
-Poe

Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2000-11-27 07:58 AM


Sven~
Now THAT'S one SWEET poet ! !
She is as delectably as you've described her.
And is that the coolest name alive - or what ?

La CocoBaci !

Her midnight meandering through the archives
is filled with flavored remarks each morn.
She is a delight and you've painted her perfectly.
~*Marge*~


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Charisma
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3 posted 2000-11-27 08:48 AM


you are really a wizard with words...
love this chocolate tribute for  Coco..


Charisma

Kethry
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4 posted 2000-11-27 08:52 AM


Sven,

you did it again!

*HuGS*

Write on
Kethry


Why do yesterdays remain and todays pass by ...unnoticed?
Rex E. Alford

SEA
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5 posted 2000-11-27 09:55 AM


Sven~ yes, Coco is wonderfully sweet always!  -SEA
Sunshine
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6 posted 2000-11-27 10:13 AM


Coco will so enjoy this!

Karilea
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I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




Celeste
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7 posted 2000-11-27 10:30 AM


Excellent!  I think you're on a roll with these!  

To capture and live a moment is truly living

Startime
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8 posted 2000-11-27 10:35 AM


Your talent for this is fantastic, helping me to get to know all these wonderful people through your words penned with love. Thank you so very much for sharing.

Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. [URL=http://path2riches.com]http://path2riches.com

Paula Finn
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9 posted 2000-11-27 11:29 AM


Sweet words for a sweet lady
Sven
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10 posted 2000-11-27 12:53 PM


Thank you all my friends. . .

Poeminister, thank you. . .  

Marge, thank you. . . she is indeed very sweet. . . and I have always thought her name was cool!  

Charisma, thank you for reading. . .  

Kethry, thanks!!  

SEA, thank you!!

Sunshine, I hope that she will. . .

dreamkeeper, a roll indeed my friend. . .

Startime, glad that you're enjoying these. . . don't forget to check out the work of all of them too!!

Paula, thank you. . .  

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


kaile
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11 posted 2000-11-27 01:15 PM


i hate to sound like i am gushing but this was sooo CUTE and SWEET verse...she will love this, no doubt
Janet Marie
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12 posted 2000-11-27 05:20 PM


another sweet treat from your pen Sven..
Coco is truly a sweetheart in Passions...
she is one of those quiet members, who is always there...she replies to our poetry twice as much as she posts her own...
and she will spend hours in the archives and back pages searching for poems she  missed.
She is a true lover of poetry.
Im so glad you honored her with this.
jm

Sprayed across my heart and hers
Danced butterflies in the wild
This angel, this woman ,
who loves me with the innocence of a child.
~DeVante~

ethome
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13 posted 2000-11-28 02:58 AM


I love how you penned your never ending kindness into this clever tribute Sven.... very fitting....ethome
CocoBaci
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14 posted 2000-11-29 01:53 AM


Sven
From the depth of my heart
I thank you for this 'Sweet Treasure' you bestow..

PoetFriends
I am blessed to make your acquaintance
As I embrace your poetic rhymes of life
Each night you sweep me to a far-off place
Where tears, tugs, smiles, hugs, sighs,
Giggles and feelings of love are abound..





Elizabeth Santos
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15 posted 2000-11-29 04:23 AM


I love chocolate
And you can't help but love coco baci
As someone said, she is always there reveling in the joys she discovers in everyone's poetry. And just look at her response. It is as delightful as all her remarks to our posts. Sven, you pegged her, then she pegged herself.
Thank you Sven for another perect portrait
Liz

Kit McCallum
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16 posted 2000-11-29 06:54 AM


Beautiful Sven ... what a perfectly sweet tribute to Coco! Your Gallery is overflowing with beauty.  So often I've seen a poem slide quietly to back pages, and smile at the name who has found it and breathed life into it again. You're a treasure Coco, in both your poetry and your responses ... and I'm so pleased Sven gave me a chance to say so!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

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17 posted 2000-11-29 10:04 AM


a very tasty poem..i love her name...

                  ~Victoria~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)


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18 posted 2000-11-29 10:21 AM


cocobaci cocobaci cocobaci yuh!!
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