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in flight through dream.................
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in flight through dream................. |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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in flight through dream not often, no, never plenteous is the interval between the extant prize freedom when most tiredness comes from restlessness of soul when one's spirit is bound by commitment but there is a span of moment when the zealous soul can take flight, if there comes the dream come, dream come swift the interval of inbetween, after the uneasiness and lassitude lend the expanse between erratic sleep and restless groan and in Cimmerian imagination betwixt the eyelid and penumbra of midnight now, attend, and take flight with me come take height with me as then in the reverie to see ourselves from without and within and you, in sheerest skin take care, not to burst the bubble vigilant as not to burst the dream thus pathos steals over we in the intent of dark's dream of freedom and as our arms lie quiescent, serenely by our sides through thought of mind only, careful, take care not to burst the dream might I through thought raise we up, up, beyond the limb of the tree, breath held, up over the roof, careful not to touch the tile, lest burst the bubble of elevation, up, careful, mental image up and now, don't look, don't look but by my side, as you have traveled upward with me, we might float over, and spy on all below, the lights of the city bright, blinking, telling we to ascend higher, higher and we float, so soft, and fly, so high flighting higher, sighting skies of firefly light lightening bright in thunderless night and silken robes then grace our form, and soft we feel in all we are warm then to extend arms to weave through this night's time of symphony of quiet, quiet, come what may in seamless dream no flight delayed, and the tingle of the skin translucent in silvery flight stretch your fingers and grasp my hand to tingle together in paired delight then to slow, now, in descent of flight, shhhh, stay quiet not to burst this dream to fall to earth in restlessness and tiredness as grows slight the light, on horizon's night, ending now this dream of flight praise comes to you for attending to me as we skimmed toward freedom of night in flight through dream Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari, that is an awesome poem, I've got goosebumps, oh this is outstandingly beautiful, even by your standards. This is incandescent, transcends mortal realm and flies light as an angels whisper and beautiful as the light from an infants face. I'm gobsmacked, again, (I'm sorry mam, Kari made me say it!) and stunned.  Love this one love absolutely adore it.Take care MM Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
close your eyes. . . and you'll be there. . . the plane is leaving now. . . wonderful my friend. . .  ------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I LOVE when this happens!!! And you portrayed it perfectly...and you are right, it is total freedom. I'd go to sleep right now, if I thought I could make it happen again...sigh...it's been awhile...but thank you for the reminder of it! |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
wonderful.....wow....on and on I read....every line....loving them all! "Always be a first rate version of your self instead of a second rate version of someone else." Marilyn Monroe |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Sometimes that dream becomes a loving reality............... A dream, so you thought. reality in loving. your dreams can be real. Oh wonderful love turn dreams to reality as our love should be Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Sometimes that dream becomes a loving reality............... A dream, so you thought. reality in loving. your dreams can be real. Oh wonderful love turn dreams to reality as our love should be < !signature--> Live for love. Without love, you don't live. [This message has been edited by Interloper (edited 12-11-2000).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Marsha, you are the only one I know who can take a turn from a child's angelic face to being gobsmacked, and I hug you for it...thank you!... Sven...you know I'm always "plane-ing"...hugs and thank you... Serenity...the most perfect freedom of all is sleep in flight...thank you for liking this with me!... Irish...thanks for reading every line...and level... Interloper, I get twice as tickled when you have so much enthusiasm you hit the reply button twice...thank you!! Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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