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Live From Atlanta....Life's a Beach |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
the ballet of waves phosphorus crests exploding on the breakwater scattering crystal water falling stars Thanks Suthern |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Wow Toerag! This is incredibly beautiful. I can picture the flowing waves in my mind perfectly. Exellent work!  *Krista Knutson* "One can never consent to creep when one feels an impulse to soar." Helen Keller |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Toe...sounds like the perfect front row seat! |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
 Beach'n poem!  Great write Toe. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautiful, Toe!! Wow!! Denise |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I was just paging through the poems... swearing to myself that I WOULD turn off the computer and go to bed when it got to be 2 am... *S* And then I saw this beauty...and feel I've taken a late-night stroll by the ocean. This is absolutely exquisite, Toe. And you're welcome. *S* |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
from someone who has yet to ever experience this gift of Nature's grace ... I say thank you for painting it so beautifully in my mind. I'm glad I didnt miss this one. saw your reply on deers post check out your deleted Erotica  jm |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Toe, just when a girl thinks she's getting to know ya, you go and do something beautiful like this. write on Keth Why do yesterdays remain and todays pass by ...unnoticed? Rex E. Alford |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Been there and what a beautiful scene it is.. you've done it justice....ethome |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Mr. Toe, now THIS is called beauty in writing..hat's off to ya for this one. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I guess yahoo knew how much I'd be missing you... it's finally delivering some of your emails it withheld from me Saturday! *G* (Of course, you know me... I wanted them then AND now... even if they were duplicates! LOL) Still smiling, dear one... and had to start my morning with another read of this!  |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Toe~ I really like this kind of poetry from you......stunning.... -SEA |
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