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Remembering The Love Of You
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Remembering The Love Of You |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida 
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 ~Remembering The Love Of You~ I want to remember the day we met when our eyes thirsted for enlightment, a glimpse of who we were in the deepest part of our hearts I want to look at the river in moonlight, and see your face reflecting in the still water I want to bathe in the water and feel you and the moon on my skin I want to light a fire, see your eyes, and feel them pierce my heart I want to kiss your face and feel tears come to my eyes from the intensity of the love I feel I want to run my fingers through your hair, then remember how it feels when I close my eyes to sleep I want to dance a waltz with you and feel the wind under my feet, lifting my heart off the floor I want to climb mountain trails and feel the pull of gravity on my hand from the feel of yours I want to remember your touch I want to hear you laugh and feel the delight rise in my spirit, from the affinity we share I want to remember the rose I saw you pick from a neighbors yard, from my window sill I peeked the complete joy I felt knowing you cared I want to hear the wish you make when you stand before candles on a cake I want to be your wish come true I want to know if you think of me too Though you are gone forever, I will always remember you this way BloomingRose |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I want to light a fire, see your eyes, and feel them pierce my heart I want to kiss your face and feel tears come to my eyes from the intensity of the love I feel I want to run my fingers through your hair, then remember how it feels when I close my eyes to sleep I want to dance a waltz with you and feel the wind under my feet, lifting my heart off the floor I want to climb mountain trails and feel the pull of gravity on my hand from the feel of yours I want to remember your touch ================== Deb, this is wonderful writing... just lovely... such sweet sincere expressions of emotions I relate to so many lines in this ... and this is my fav of yours now... ( nice to see a long one from you too)  very well done take care jm There are moments ... when I Love you beyond the limits of my human heart ... ...you will always be mine. Collin Raye |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
"I want to be your wish come true I want to know if you think of me too" This is a beautiful piece. I can relate to it really well, and I especally love the quoted lines above. Lost love always leave its scar, doesn't it? Thanks for sharing. "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautifully done, Deb! Denise |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
JM~ Thank you  Lovebug~ We carry the memories of our past. To reflect is sometimes a cleansing way to place it on a shelf. Thanks for your reply. Denise~ Thank you. [This message has been edited by BloomingRose (edited 11-25-2000).] |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Blooming Rose, I want to say what an absolutely inspiring piece this write is. write on Kethry Why do yesterdays remain and todays pass by ...unnoticed? Rex E. Alford |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BloomingRose~ Well ... I have to say that this is sooooooo purty ! I just love it. What lovely, lovely thoughts. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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