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Michael G
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since 2000-06-25
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Nashville

0 posted 2000-11-24 02:24 AM


Some strange reasons that fail me
I have found my hearts content
much quicker I am sure
than others would have thought.
But to let pass this chance
holding close to my breast
a soul of delicate fragrance
and her touch, that I have wept
in silent passing of the moon
while we lay in  lovers dreams.
That one day shall come true
allowing us to heal
for we have lived in falsities
that have let us learn pain
which now we must put away
to begin to live and love again.

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Poet deVine
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1 posted 2000-11-24 07:27 AM


Michael, this is so true..we do have to take it one step at a time. Love this one!  
Charisma
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2 posted 2000-11-24 08:52 AM


I agree with Poet deVine...
one step at a time is a good begin.


Charisma

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

3 posted 2000-11-24 02:25 PM


But to let pass this chance
holding close to my breast
a soul of delicate fragrance
and her touch, that I have wept
in silent passing of the moon
while we lay in  lovers dreams.
That one day shall come true
allowing us to heal
for we have lived in falsities
that have let us learn pain
which now we must put away
to begin to live and love again.
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we heal in the light of love
heres to stepping back into the light
beautiful words Michael ... heart learned wisdom.
jm

Marina
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since 2000-02-10
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Pickering, Ontario
4 posted 2000-11-24 10:37 PM


The healing part is always the hardest.  It sounds like you have mastered the difficult part already.  Look into the light, for someone waits for you there...

Marina


It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen
Marina Crossley


Sven
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5 posted 2000-11-25 07:40 PM


The light is always the best place to start. . .

Excellent poem. . .

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


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