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Marsha
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0 posted 2000-11-23 07:14 PM



I Believe In Angels

I believe in angels with their awesome majesty
I believe that when I really need to see one
That an angel will descend and come to me
A beautiful winged angel as bright as the sun
I believe in angels and they bring love to see
I believe in our love and that you are the one

I believe that the world can be a beautiful place
I believe the world will be a wonder to behold
That in the world beauty reflects Gods grace
A beautiful world that its treasures it enfolds
I believe that the beauty within we can trace
I believe in love and having your heart to hold

I believe in magic that love and truth can touch
I believe that magic will bring my hearts desire
That magic will give me what I miss so very much
Magic is the key which unlocks this loves fire
I believe in the magic of a flowers gentle touch
I believe in trust and I believe we can fly higher

Marsha


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning

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Janet Marie
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1 posted 2000-11-23 08:43 PM


beautiful Marsha...wonderful imagery and your rhyme pattern is excellent.
a lovely poem of sincerity and faith.
perfect poetry
take care
jm

There are moments ...
when I Love you
beyond the limits of my human heart ...

...you will always be mine.

Collin Raye


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2 posted 2000-11-23 08:56 PM


I believe, too, Marsha. Your poem caught me a bit off guard, as I JUST had this conversation with a friend. And sometimes, angels, they come unaware...

Loved the faith and love evident in this. Hugs lady, and a very happy Thanksgiving to you!

Aimster
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3 posted 2000-11-23 09:10 PM


marsha~

this is beautiful! and i believe in
angels too. wonderful poem full of
hope and faith. truly loved this!

take care.
~amy~

ethome
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4 posted 2000-11-24 08:52 AM


I believe in all those things too Marsha and I hope that others will realize the comfort of them
Sunshine
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5 posted 2000-11-24 09:03 AM


Angels come in many ways...and one of life's most wondrous joys is when we recognize the form of them...

I do...


Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




Charisma
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6 posted 2000-11-24 09:13 AM


I believe in Angels too,



you have written an amazing piece....truly love it

((hugs))

Charisma

Denise
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7 posted 2000-11-24 10:23 AM


Beautiful, Marsha!

Denise

Marsha
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8 posted 2000-11-24 11:28 AM


Janet Marie, I thank you, I truly do. But I really can't take an awful lot of credit for this one. I've no idea where this one came from, unless there were some angels wandering around the hospital last night. I'll give them the credit, because they were certainly working hard last night, unlike me, in fact my joke poem took me ages to do. And then this appeared. So thank you angels.
Take care
                Mushy
Serenity, isn't it always that way, I think it's sort of Gods way of confirming our belief. Thank you muchly, and a happy thanksgiving to you too. (We don't have it here, but it sounds like fun. )
                      
Amy, yes love they definitely exisit, working in a hospital you know that they are real. Anyway you would know because you are one, I know.   Thank you love I'm pleased you like it.
Take care
             Mushy

Ethome, so now love if I give you an angel can I keep the unicorn? Actually you know the saga of the knight who didn't took far longer than this did. This is one of those that appears quite suddenly, and I've no idea from where. They are a comfort aren't they. Now have you re-written the ending?
Take care
                   Mushy  
                      
Kari, you are so right, they do indeed. One of my favourites is an angel who writes perfect poetry and has the sun shining as her symbol with the inital K.  
Take care love
                  Majestic Marsha
                  
Charisma, thank you and thank you so much for the picture, I can't do them at all, I've tried but it's all too complicated for me. So thank you muchly.
                      

Denise, thank you and I do appreciate it.

Take care
                Marsha


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning

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