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Just One, Once
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Just One, Once |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Just one, once is it then so wrong so sad to wish nay hope oh, to want just one to be the one electrify me once sing my soul once just the once that would be the lifetime of memory if I had the chance but once to sing so that only you would hear me feel me enter in once into your heart would you know? Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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SEA 
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Sunshine~ Oh my gosh!! Are you peeking into my soul?! Stop that!  This is perfect poetry.......I love this!  -SEA |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
SEA, quit inspiring me, then I shan't write...  < !signature-->Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ [This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 11-22-2000).] |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Sunshine,loved it!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
hopefully. . . yes. . . this is all that we ask for isn't it? ------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
No, it's not wrong, sunshine. If you sing I promise I will hear, even if it is only a whisper..... What a way with words you have......... |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Lovely poem. Nicely written. Poeminister "...no single sound too rude upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls- O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love." -Poe |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Sunshine, this poem is great... Ya know sweetie, you have a flair with words that just seem to pirouette across the screen... Coco |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Your wish is the same one I have. Sigh.. You expressed it with perfect longing. Sandra |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari, nothing about love is wrong. Oh love this is as perfect a poem as I've ever seen. This is so right in everything, excellant, writing. C'est manifique, c'est la creme de la creme. Wonderful love sheer poetry. Take care Majestic M Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Vandana...I could not ask for a more worthwhile reader....thank you... Sven, hopefully...yes.... 'Deer, would you listen to all such whisperings...I think...yes... Thank you Poeminister... Coco...pirouette...yes...I always have wanted to dance...and to think, I once wore the tutu...and have pictures to prove it... Cat...If wishes were horses...go you and I... Marsha,...I may never know what or who drew you in, but I am most certainly glad you've become a friend... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
This absolutely took my breath away...such tender longing and woven with exquisite care and grace...now one of my favorites from you...and there are so many but this is going in my library most definately! You cannot dance in the sun until you have cried in the rain~ |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
BDC,...my young, lifting up friend...thank you for your inspiration...all things come...you know this...a special message for you... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
If I can't have it all... can I have just a moment? *S* This is great, Sunshine... I like it very much! |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Suthern, you sweet thing...you may always have a moment, and then one more...thank you... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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