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eyesplus2 Member
since 2000-03-02
Posts 163australia |
I love you in a lifetime of moments.......... Yet I have a moment of lifetimes........ I yearn to be with you always........... Yet I'm never without you......... I give you all my wishes........... Yet all I wish for is you......... I give all my riches for your thoughts....... Yet all my riches are your thoughts..... I give my all to you.......... Yet my all is you........ |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Clever format the way you sum up your thoughts with the reality of the situation... loved this one..... it's the kind of poem that stays with the reader...good show!! |
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LilPeanut Junior Member
since 2000-11-21
Posts 26Pennsylvania, USA |
Bravo!! I loved this poem. It is definetly one that will stick in my mind. Nice flow and style to it. So deep in thought. And so very true. Job well done! *applause* Have a wonderful day!  Kelly |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
nicely done, and I always feel awful when my poems get buried quickly without being read so I am bumpin you up!  |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I really liked this poem. . . Yet I knew that I would. . . ----------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Shelby Olivia Junior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 25 |
Its wonderful to be in love and feel so much. |
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