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A Simple Truth....Senryu
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A Simple Truth....Senryu |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Simple truth... I am a poet and cannot live without you you are poetry |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Poeminister, Well said. Your message is loud and clear.  LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Lone Wolf --Thankee. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
PoeMinister~ Poet, you said it Poetry reflects your heart Shines right back on you *Most enjoyable, my friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
you have captured the poets desire poetically and perfectly well done senyru ... so many times...less is more... take care jm |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
It always amazes me, the vast messages and feelings that can be described in such short poems. You are very talented, my friend. Keep up the great work! "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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Skyfyre Senior Member
since 1999-08-15
Posts 1906Sitting in Michael's Lap |
So much wisdom in so few words is a rare thing indeed. I am not familiar with the form, but the poetic execution here was quietly amazing. --Linda Remember: maintaining a positive attitude may not solve all your problems, but it will certainly annoy enough people to make it worth the effort. |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
i must say that your senryu are some of the most original i have read so far... i have read only three...the Kiss senryu, the History of the universe senryu and this one....have you written any more to delight my eyes with? |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
BRAVO!!You have captured the heart of all poets within these simple but powerful words. Thank you so much for the read. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very nice! Denise |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Marge--Thank you for your comment and stopping by to read. Always appreciated. JM--Glad you liked. Thanks for your comment. LoveBug--Thanks for the kind comment. SkyFyre--Nice to meet, thank you much for your words...as far as the form Senryu is just a japanese form of poem-writing in threelines, 5 syllables on first line, 7 on the second, and 5 again on the third without any rhyme and can basically be about anything opposed to being just about nature like Haikus..in a nutshell.. Hope that i've explained it ok...thanks again for your comment... Kaile--Your words are always kind and encouraging. Thanks for stopping by to read. Startime and Denise--Thank you both for your comments and for reading. Poeminister [This message has been edited by Poeminister (edited 11-25-2000).] |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
well said.... its simply the truth Charisma |
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