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Aimster
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0 posted 2001-01-09 08:01 PM


Thoughts

waves crash against sandy shore
at the closing of another day
sun descending behind tall pine trees
as time starts slipping away

the sound of thunder in the distance
as lightning meets dark blue sky
and i sit and ponder over issues
as always constantly questioning why

rain comes pouring down
puddles all around
funny how sometimes when it hits
water doesn't make a sound

why is it people play games
when really there's no use
and after all is said and done
all that remains is years of abuse

sitting in the rain
i let it wash over my soul
hoping that when the sun comes out
i'll once again feel whole

amy m kennedy


© Copyright 2001 Amy Kennedy - All Rights Reserved
Mother_Earth
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1 posted 2001-01-11 10:02 PM


Amy, I don't think abuse can ever be "washed" away, but the rain may dilute them. Know that you are not alone. Prayers and hugs,  ME
EagleScorpion
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2 posted 2001-01-11 11:54 PM


the symbolism here is fantastic
Aimster
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3 posted 2001-01-12 10:07 AM


mother earth~
you are true about the rain not being
able to wash way abuse...but it does
help at least for the time being to
sort of concentrate on what's good in
ones life and forget the not so good
at least for a while. thanks for your
kind response.

eaglescorpion~
glad you liked the symbolism! that's
exactly what i was going for with this
one. take care~

amy

~A true friend is one soul in two bodies~



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4 posted 2001-01-12 04:36 PM


And forgetting... even for a while... may be just what's needed to maintain sanity. *S* Great thoughts here, Aimster!
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5 posted 2001-01-18 03:10 PM


Sometimes we all have to wait in the rain.

Good poem

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