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slipknot
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since 2000-05-31
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0 posted 2001-01-08 03:13 AM


What's wrong?
I've heard quite often
"Nothing," I reply
Damn
What a lie
So many thoughts going through my head
I can't make sense of even one
I'm so confused and don't know what to do
More often than not I wish I were dead
Everybody asks, just to be nice
But nobody gets beyond my barrier
They all buy it when you say "nothing"
Because it's easier
For them to believe you are fine
Than to deal with a problem with a friend
Is there ever going to be an end?



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dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida
1 posted 2001-01-08 08:49 PM


They all buy it when you say "nothing"
Because it's easier
For them to believe you are fine
Than to deal with a problem with a friend

a true friend hears what you dont say..and doesnt hear you tell lies..
speak louder..or perhaps..find your true friends to 'speak' to    
i hope you find your hearts listener very soon SLIP...

hugs, g



"there is no 'best' in a world of individuals"
-unknown


Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
2 posted 2001-01-08 09:05 PM


I hung around my daughters long enough to know that it had to be their decision to make the step toward taking one of those confused thoughts and sputtering it forth...I didn't leave, nor give up...

but it takes two to make a conversation.

I hope you will.  Hugs, Sunshine

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