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jwesley
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0 posted 2001-01-07 05:38 PM



Riding The Greyhound: Grosse Point, La.
(from Boyhood Tales)

She was an old lady,
black, and at the time,
older than I ever thought
anyone could be.
She spoke to me of her kids,
grandkids, and chickens.
She said her social security check
was all the money she had,
except for the yard eggs she sold,
sixty-cents a dozen.
She took the Greyhound,
once a month, rain or shine,
from Grosse Point, La. to Bay St. Louis, Miss.
to see her daughter.
I was seventeen, she was ninety-two.
It was nineteen sixty-two,
just outside New Orleans when I sat next to her.
She talked to me, mile after mile,
sharing her life, what it meant to be black,
her husband, who died last year;
she showed me a side of life
that has marked me to this day.
She taught me, in six hours of Louisiana
backroads and pitstops,
to love everyone in some way,
to reach out and touch someone,
God wanted it that way.
She said she was tired, with forty miles to go,
rested her head against the window,
said wake her when we reached Grosse Point.
I cried hard that day
as they carried her from the bus,
for this old lady I never knew,
for the youth that faded with her life,
for being there when she didn't need to be alone,
for all the reasons I never cried before.
I was seventeen then,
back in nineteen sixty-two,
riding the Greyhound,
just because I wanted to.


w.  james beard, jr.
© January 2001






[This message has been edited by jwesley (edited 01-07-2001).]
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misscris
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1 posted 2001-01-07 06:03 PM


when my best friend died my senior year of high school, my pastor told me that we are here on loan from God, and eventually he needs us back in heaven to keep Him company....
beautiful story
misscris

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2 posted 2001-01-07 06:12 PM


JWesley~
What a lovely boyhood tale.
Gave me little shivers of sadness.
But it serves her memory well that she impacted your life.
I would think she likes knowing that -
and she does, my friend.
Thank you for sharing this write from the heart.
~*Marge*~


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Victoria
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3 posted 2001-01-07 06:53 PM


what a wonderful poem..to be remembered almost forty years later..by someone riding along side of her..how happy she would be and maybe she is...

                 ~V~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)



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4 posted 2001-01-07 07:05 PM


You just can't imagine how much I enjoy this style of writing....little heart-felt and impressionable snippets of our memories and the small things that influenced us as we were growing up...and you have written this so well and in such a humane way....very powerful writing...

I love this....

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5 posted 2001-01-12 04:01 PM


The title drew this Louisiana gal in... and I'm so glad it did! This is wonderful!
JamesMichael
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6 posted 2001-01-13 04:33 PM


Very interesting style and story...James
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