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Sweet Waltzing Romance |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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~*Marge Tindal*~ When love comes walking across the room taps you on the heart and requests this dance Hold on tenderly while the music is playing for this will be your sweet waltzing romance When the music ends - it's up to you to keep in-step while humming the well-danced tune Swaying to the melody of the first dance found within the taking of that second chance Arms of remember holding you while breathtaking moments awaken Gazing into the eyes of the future with this dance of chance you've taken With a passionate voice of song writing unforgotten memories Step lightly into this heart of mine sweet romance is now waltzing ~ eternally ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
ohhh WOW Marge....  this is breathtaking...Greeneyes~ *** "Within you I lose myself Without you I find myself Wanting to be lost again." -Unknown |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Margie girl, this is truly wonderful, I really and truly love this. I love this it is such a wonderful idea, and when I ready to put my glitzy frock on I'll come and join you. (Although I do think I get an awful lot of attention in that dress, sometimes it's more welcome than others.) Take care Mushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Marge "Arms of remember holding you" This is such a cool line, too good! And the whole poem... romantic magic. Write on Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Swaying to the melody of the first dance found within the taking of that second chance Arms of remember holding you while breathtaking moments awaken Gazing into the eyes of the future with this dance of chance you've taken With a passionate voice of song writing unforgotten memories Step lightly into this heart of mine sweet romance is now waltzing ~ eternally =================== hey Margie-girl..ya know what...this is A GROOVY  and I know where this is coming from and its way cool *wink* and your way cool too... this is one of my all time fav songs ... your officially passions DJ me girlie-girl beautiful poem of the promises found in second chances and romantic dances. very sweet Margie-gator your writing smiles today jm Am I loved by my words Will my vows weather the tide Bended knees can forsee all the rhythms of life And a heart can be held without pride ~Vante |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
There is nothing more beautiful or romantic than two lovers in a waltz......well done, my friend......I can hear the music play....  Write on! -<--<--{(@ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
GreenEyes~ I'm so pleased you found it thusly so. Thank you. Marsha~ Honey, you can join this dance in that glitzy frock anytime you wanna, babe ! Thank you for seeing the romantic magic. JanetMarie~ You are a doll who knows all - I thank you for the smiles you write on my heart. Sunny1~ Yes, indeed~ and the hearts sing in unison. Thank you for visiting the dance hall. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
I echo the others...a radiantly romantic read...beautiful writing. Poeminister "...no single sound too rude upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls- O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love." -Poe |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
okay my friend........do I need to tell you I loved this one for more than the fact that it is a wonderful poem from you? NO, I didn't think so. I absolutely LOVE that last verse. I wonder how it is that a certain phrase or word just hits you and all of a sudden makes the world seem like a garden of happiness. Thank you for sharing this one my friend. BIG HUGS to you for it. (I also liked the other verses too as you know........especially since the tie alot of memories up in little ribbons for us.) |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
PoeMinister~ Gosh, I sure thank you for such a nice comment. I'm pleased you enjoyed it. MarkB~ You know that I knew you would love it ! You are wonderfully inspirational, my sweet friend - and now I smile. *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
hehehe yuh sweet walter romance??? fat chance!!! hehehehe sweet poem yuh |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Waltzer~ You'd be on the dance card for sure ! (Truth day, it is.) *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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