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ethome
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0 posted 2000-11-21 02:36 PM



Most honest hearted true lovers search
for treasured wonders with an open heart.
And as the passion spins in tales unearthed
their tender smiles are wrought with pondering.
And then, disputing with their own deep soul
pictures in worn frames show cold realities past.
Looking to avoid old discordant woes
their hearts their foes, to make new goals thier fashion.
Truth they need then, the world's lost element
for blessed feelings are their hidden joys.
In those bullied hearts seeking warm content
are kissed thoughts, musing bonds like sacraments.

Inside worn frames, there lies a golden dream
that roams the world's eye, where love still gleams.

© Copyright 2000 Eric Lewis True - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2000-11-21 02:49 PM


Oh Paula will enjoy this so very much....

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




ethome
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2 posted 2000-11-21 03:17 PM


Thanks Sunshine I know she will!!
madlion
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boca raton
3 posted 2000-11-21 04:25 PM


thats is a great poem and to you Ethome thank you for your encouragement..
DreamSeeker
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4 posted 2000-11-21 04:53 PM


What Stories Fill
Faded Photos Eyes
Inside Gaze Out
Trying To See

The Changes Wrought
Since Captured In
That Moment Captured
Souls Aspire To...

Marsha
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5 posted 2000-11-21 06:08 PM


Ethome, she will adore this as much as I do. It's, amazing, astounding, beautiful, delightful, delicious, delectable, de lovely, excellant, enchanting, engaging, enthralling, enticing, exquisite. (There a few to be going on with.   ) all joking aside this is really wonderful. and I did say I liked it didn't I?  
Take care
                Mushy  


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning

Victoria
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6 posted 2000-11-21 06:12 PM


lovely indeed ethome.. enjoyed..and happy thanksgiving to you and Paula

                ~Victoria~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)


Janet Marie
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7 posted 2000-11-21 06:21 PM


Truth they need then, the world's lost element
for blessed feelings are their hidden joys.
In those bullied hearts seeking warm content
are kissed thoughts, musing bonds like sacraments.
Inside worn frames, there lies a golden dream
that roams the world's eye, where love still gleams
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this is wonderful E-babes
such depth of pondering ...
I have been moved many times by Pauls poetry as she shares her search for a heart that is true.
beautiful poetry here...
I love the metaphors and mystic truths
later-wise-gator
jm

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8 posted 2000-11-21 06:50 PM


excellent ethome. . . she will indeed enjoy this wonderful tribute. . .  

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


ethome
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9 posted 2000-11-21 07:46 PM


Thanks very much madlion for your input and enjoy your time here at passions...ethome

Great verses DreamSeeker...they fit right in good stuff!!

Marsha do you really dare to leave all those out around me....I might scoop'em up.... thanks Marsha for your always kind comments.

Thanks Victoria for the Thanksgiving wish and the comment....ethome

Thanks Janet so much for your wonderful insight into the situation and for your thoughtful and tender comments....you're just VANtastic!!

Thanks Sven I'm sure she will...ethome

Paula Finn
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10 posted 2000-11-21 11:49 PM


I do...oh I do...you have me in tears now ethome...I dont know what to say...you have me speechless...hugs and oh just you wait!!!!!
ethome
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11 posted 2000-11-22 07:42 PM


Paula through all the posts you have read and absorbed you have always returned replies that have been honest and from the heart....I sincerely believe that you deserve a little poetic toast to your fine qualities....your poet friend     ethome
Kit McCallum
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12 posted 2000-11-22 09:29 PM


Beautiful Ethome! Wonderful wording, simply exquisite ... I'm so glad Paula enjoyed this ... what a lovely tribute to her. Excellent writing!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

ethome
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13 posted 2000-11-23 06:42 AM


Thanks Kit I'm glad you enjoyed the content and thanks for stopping to read.....ethome
CocoBaci
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14 posted 2000-11-24 04:28 PM



Ethome, a great write for a sweet poetlady...

Coco

ethome
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15 posted 2000-11-24 06:21 PM


Thank you Coco for the kind reply I know Paula will appreciate it......ethome
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