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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England 
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Feel Breathe in, now exhale You must or else you fail Tell your heart to beat Or suffer hearts deceit Touch within your soul You will be made whole But you must Don't lose trust Just breathe in Feel love within Let your blood move, flow Feel your heart again glow Open up your teary eyes Don't let love fantasize Face these truths you need Make your soul take heed But do it now You know how Just let it flow Feel love grow Make your mind take flight Bathe rejuvenating light Reveal your spirit within Awake and arise, enter in Believe in loves' soft kiss Don't loves' smile dismiss But don't wait Nor hesitate Just take wing Feel loves spring Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Now this is a format that fits you well my friend. I loved the way you took the cadence to a new level in this one and you found a way to say twice as much in half the amount of words. Wonderful penning from you this afternoon. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Mark my friend, thank you so very very much, I was trying a variety of different styles and it was a very interesting exercise, although I'm not sure if this is what Kari was trying to get me to see. But if such a connoiseur as you found it enjoyable then I am pleased. I do thank you a great deal Take care Mushy  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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