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The Power of Suggestion |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
The Power Of Suggestion… In the stillness of this quiet night I lie alone, sleepless…thinking of you… Feeling, with every bit of passion that lies within me, nothing but love for you… As my soul projects the warmth of my heart to yours place your hand upon your chest and dare to feel my heartbeat… Having once laid your head upon my breast listen carefully and in the silence of your soul you might hear my cries of longing… Close your eyes and reach towards the heavens and feel in the palm of your hand, the last soft trace of my lips as we said goodbye… Look within the heart of a poet, and you will see a reflection of their soul. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
WOW!!! This is a great write, so longing....well penned indeed Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
"and feel in the palm of your hand, the last soft trace of my lips as we said goodbye…" A Whisper's Caress, its so nice to see you back at Passions. A wonderful, soft peice this is. Beautifully written. Enjoyed muchly the read... Poeminister "...no single sound too rude upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls- O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love." -Poe |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Feeling, with every bit of passion that lies within me, nothing but love for you… As my soul projects the warmth of my heart to yours place your hand upon your chest and dare to feel my heartbeat… ================== breathtaking ... beautiful expression of love that extends beyond physical separation. lovely emotional poem take care jm Am I loved by my words Will my vows weather the tide Bended knees can forsee all the rhythms of life And a heart can be held without pride ~Vante |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Very powerful and emotional poem from you tonight. Your words really send the impact of your love across the pages well. Well written and expressed. |
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dragonpoe Senior Member
since 2000-11-12
Posts 608Palm Bay, Florida |
"Having once laid your head upon my breast listen carefully and in the silence of your soul you might hear my cries of longing…" Beautiful lines there, and tho' I enjoyed the poem in its entirety, I really love that verse. With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free.. dragonpoe |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Whispering one. . . the power of these words. . . amazing. . . ------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
Everyone, Thank you so so much for the very gracious replies.  Look within the heart of a poet, and you will see a reflection of their soul. |
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Lady Lightning Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 422Kentucky |
I loved this, much..So much emotions you"ve shown ..I could so feel the longing in this one..Wonderful write... ~LL~ The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
how sad  |
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