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Marsha
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0 posted 2001-01-06 02:50 PM


Hearts Dance

If you listen carefully you can hear a whispered song
It's a special melody that's been playing all night long
It started up immediately that you walked into the room
I wondered if you could hear it as it swept away my gloom
For so long I've not heard it's sound or heard it call to me
I wonder if I ask your heart to dance will it say, yes I'm free
I've missed so much the feel of music here within my heart
And it seemed as if of her song I'd never more have a part

Can you hear the melody bejeweling the night with light
It's delicate sound is flowing and fills me with such delight
The notes are so sweet they remind me of what I'd missed
The heat of passion and the wonder of lips that feel kissed
Please tell me that you can hear the rhythm of loves call
And that my heart hasn't made of herself an a wretched fool
I couldn't bear it if she was alone hearing this loves tune
The only one who wants to dance by the light of the moon

Those notes I'm hearing are teasing my mind with dreams
Recalling all those memories and stretching my souls seams
I can remember the dances and the visions swirl all around
Oh how much I've missed her enchantingly magical sound
You can hear the melody, I can see her running through you
Stirring your soul and unraveling your own memories it's true
But if we unite in this brand new adventurous hearts dance
We might find love waiting, are you willing to take a chance


Marsha

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Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
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[This message has been edited by Marsha (edited 01-06-2001).]

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Sunnyone
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1 posted 2001-01-06 03:11 PM


Oh, Bubbles......
Your heart, above all, could teach all of us some new dance steps!!!! This was wonderful, and full of love, and I did love it!!  


Write on!
-<--<--{(@



Mark Bohannan
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2 posted 2001-01-06 04:04 PM


Dancing seems to be popular these days and you do it so well in your words my friend.  This was a beautiful tune sung from your heart and I hope you find a dance soon that deserves to hold your name.  
Marsha
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3 posted 2001-01-06 07:34 PM


Lil sis, hey love, you are such a sweetheart, you lift all and sparkle too, such wonderful encouragement you give love.
Thank you so very muchly
Take care
                Bubbles
                    
Mark my friend, again thank you, dances are popular aren't they. It's the music calling to me and it's out there all I have to do is keep listening and I'll hear it's magic sound. Thank you again I do appreciate it
Take care
               Mushy
                  


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning



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4 posted 2001-01-06 08:15 PM


Marsha~
Put that sequined dress on, darling ~
Go dancing and dazzle 'em.

You've got a natural knack for the rhyme ~

'If you listen carefully you can hear a whispered song
It's a special melody that's been playing all night long'


Now THAT'S a beauty !
~*Marge*~


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Marsha
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5 posted 2001-01-07 05:54 AM


Margie girl, as soon as I get some time off I shall. In the meantime, I'll be cleaning my 'plumage' and getting ready to again fly high and free
Thank you sweetie, and you too love
Take care
                  Mushy
                    


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning



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