Collide the Sun- A goodbye to a friend

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Collide the Sun- A goodbye to a friend

Michael G
Senior Member

since 2000-06-25

Posts 579
Nashville

0 posted 2001-01-06 02:02 PM

His was a soul of fire
that danced on the solar winds
giving him the sight of lost wisdom
through fallen eyes composed.
He was neither charity nor fate
and in a moments rush
he could break the body
or love the sin of hope.
He understood simplicity
but garnered the extrodinary
wondering if all the world
was truly a stage.
You see I loved him
as friend, a brother of sorts
on that would stand to battle
or be gracious with his heart.
Of his heart,
it was full and compasionate
but always was weak in strength
for a world that cares little.
Upon hearing of his passing
I looked to the wind, my friend
and heard you laugh your freedom
from the solice last felt.
And true to your eyes
to see the world apart
the Sun dimed once
as the angels gathered you up.

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

1 posted 2001-01-06 02:10 PM

a lovely tribute, Michael

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

Parker
Member Elite

since 2000-01-06

Posts 3129
ON

2 posted 2001-01-06 02:18 PM

Michael, a trully amazing write... If souls can hear i'm sure he is smiling.

Parker

brian madden
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since 2000-05-06

Posts 4374
ireland

3 posted 2001-01-06 02:35 PM

a beautiful tribute to your friend. I know that he your words and am sure he would approve.

There's a feeling of contentment Now that you are here I feel satisfied I belong
inside Your velvet heaven" Depeche mode

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